Thanks
Hey everyone,
- I have made this as my original thread of creations i.e the ballads and the writing stuffs.
- All sketches and drawing stuff may go in drawing thread. I don’t feel like making new ones for each ballad that will have not more than 10 posts and will remain as it is. We can’t even delete them. As all are continuing with original thread i too would like to continue with this one. If anyone has any objections feel free to comment and tag me
Okay so here i go with the next one
New beginnings
After all the deadly wars
When time has healed our scars
With one little hope of light
And a try to forget our frights
A small heart with a brontide
Enough to overcome any tide
Comes out of ash and dust
From dark incinerated past
This exquisite process starts
With a deep desire for change
We emerge from our wabbits
And feel something strange
Awaking from dark sweven
We find our lost querencia
Which lend us a seed of hope
With our minds lost in eunoia
And those thoughts, so intense
Far deeper than ravines
The thoughts which help us start
New life by changing time
Child life is sometimes dark
But light is never dead
Have quoted this before
At times have heard and said
But we realized it today
That it really does make sense
So we held ourselves a bouquet
For having great strengths
Cause moving on isn’t easy
But it’s most beautiful step
As it takes us far away
From the past where we existed
@acemasters
@jabinquaken
@gatsie
@rickvanmeijel
@AJ_7
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@the_termin8r
@theearlywalker
@framos1792
Have also edited the first post and summarised all the ballads
These are great lyrics, looking forward to your future stuff. It’s cool to also see you creating your own threads, let the creativity flow
Thaanx @rickvanmeijel aye ame haepi dat yue lieked eat. Aye weal traye tue righte everi weakend but aye don’te gate tyme .Aye haive gote toe tiep lieke theis becauese auf @the_termin8r 'cs chaelenje.
Soury faur thaet (rick)
I was like wtf until I read the terminator’s post lol
It’s just a great energy that makes high flushing all this great creative threads. Thanx for your sharing your ballad @Honey8. Reading your lines make me feel like wow, so young and already this profoundly statements and conclusions and powerful impressing metaphors… Respect soldier, very great!!
The message arriving on my side is: the power and strengh for changes is in everyone- be proud and just DO IT!
Great input for my monday morning - it makes my mind, aka me, strong today!
Thanx Honey, your ballad makes my morning brighter
Aye new eat. Thats whai sed sauri before.
Uoe re alvaise velkomed @theearlywalker . Sauri faur leting uoe maeke efortz tou reade theis. Aye cante healp eat.
Waooow . Dats realy wery gr8 .
Eat ease realy wery greate tou hear that. Thankz a loat. A wery greate compleameant.
Weal tray tou make moare bright moarningz faur uoe thankz
My goodness! You are so talented, there are too many beautiful words to try and quote only a few, nice work!
These lines give me so much energy and bring light into my world!
Very beautiful @Honey8, loved it!
Thank you so much for your words. Feels great to hear that. Will try to write more and bring nice ideas for y’all
And you too @jessiee76 thnx for the compliment
No problem!
How can I contact you out of the forums?
You can tag me… if talking about forums…
Or join the discord to send a personal message
Here’s the invite link : https://discord.gg/xzeBfEZ
It’s nothing important… Just to see if you can help me a little on something I’ll email you! Thank u, @Honey8
I am always there… will wait for the email…
Great one well done!!!
Thank you friend.
I always try to write something through which i can connect people. Something to inspire them and make them feel really like themselves. Like ‘being you’ kinda stuffs. When i started writing today, i was really in a bad mood. I wrote everything that was in my mind that time. It was really personal. Wasn’t sure if i could connect people through it or not. Still i would like to post them…it was untitled
You usually forced me some tasks
Felt like kinda I was wearing a mask
Showed everyone the person I ain’t
Through those masks with different paints
You pointed me for everything I loved
Rejected every single wish I had
100% efforts to make me like you
Made me do what you always had to do.
It was your mistake you didn’t live your dreams
I ain’t you so will always appeal
Will object for everything you’ve done
Well still won’t speak with language of guns
I do really respect your feelings
Its never late to learn something
If you wish you can start right now
I am here to support and build you up
I thought this isn’t so inspiring and just my feelings. Completely changed and wrote a new one. Still couldn’t bring a lot of beauty to the language. So here’s the latest one for y’all . Hope you all like it.
LOVE THE WAY YOU LIVE!
We live our lives in our own way
Dancing in rain or snacks by the bay
Working through day and rest at night
And every life with a different plight
Thousands of people, thousands of plights
Waking every morning through a new light
Some do reckon and get obsessed
And some get times to feel depressed
Okay I agree the times are hard
But you can find happiness everyday
In some small instances of daily life
Which you never see in your pain
A bad day becomes because of bad thoughts
Not because a bad experience
Its your mind that keeps on thinking bout’ it
And this is what makes the difference
Every day is new opportunity
To create and learn something
To embrace your faults and skills
And experience new thrills
Shakespeare quotes world’s a stage
And men and women merely players
We play our part and go away
And disappear in sunlight glares
We have got only one chance to live
Lets live the way we want
Love the way we live our lives
And ignore the things which haunt
@acemasters
@jabinquaken
@gatsie
@rickvanmeijel
@AJ_7
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@theearlywalker
@the_termin8r
@framos1792