Seems like it runs in the family!
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Oh that is amaaaziing!! 
Sooo cute! Aw the proud daddy! 
Lots of wishes to your lovely lilā angel! 
Keep Creations alive!
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what a happy and talented kid! Grats to the proud daddy 
, thanx for this wonderful share Ace
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Thatās so cute he is going to be a great writer one just like you and gave him a big hug for his first song
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@rickvanmeijel stole my words Jajaja jk, I donāt know why but I imagine him running for all the house singing it and thatās awesome, amazing and really beautiful. Congratulations to both of you!
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Might have to steal it and write around it 
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Here is song 10 and 11 since my challenge ended
Uncontained Feeling
I tried to bury my feelings deep within
However, they always find a way to the surface
Broken down in fits of rage, because I canāt keep it locked down
Shattered to pieces, I donāt think it will ever heal
Why canāt I find a way to let you go?
Why do you haunt me day and night?
Everytime a memory of you, comes into my head
Even if itās a happy one, it makes me upset instead
I donāt want to forget you, but want it to stop hurting
All I want is abit of closure, itās all Iāve been yearning
I tried to hide how I am feeling inside
It always shows, even when Iām smiling
Iām angry at myself, I donāt know how to keep it contained
Feeling like that it will never heal
Why canāt I find a way to let you go?
Why do you haunt me day and night?
Everytime a memory of you, comes into my head
Even if itās a happy one, it makes me upset instead
I donāt want to forget you, but want it to stop hurting
All I want is abit of closure, itās all Iāve been yearning
I just want it to stop hurting
I just want to feel alright
I just want to feel normal inside
Why canāt I find a way to let you go?
Why do you haunt me day and night?!
Everytime a memory of you, comes into my head
Even if itās a happy one, it makes me upset instead
I donāt want to forget you, but want it to stop hurting
All I want is abit of closure, itās all Iāve been yearning
Keep Moving Forward
I can see the lightā¦
Right though the darkā¦
It shines the wayā¦
Even if I canāt see itā¦
Iām walking awayā¦
Leaving the past behindā¦
I donāt know where Iām goingā¦
At least Iām moving forwardā¦
(Heavy Guitar Instrumental Break)
Life is making senseā¦
Now I have controlā¦
I feel I have purposeā¦
For the first time in my lifeā¦
Iām not looking backā¦
Thereās nothing there for meā¦
It stays in my pastā¦
As I keep on moving forwardā¦
(Heavy Guitar instrumental break)
I have not forgottenā¦
What I have been throughā¦
It has made me strongerā¦
It keeps me moving forwardā¦
(Final Full Band instrumental break)
The Band
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Uncontained feeling itās awesome!! Both are beautifully writtenā¦but first one is my favourite 
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ouuuuchhhhh
Itās like you write my feelings on paper, the first in the past and currently the second 
Iād love to someday hear completed songs of these 
Truly awesome work bro
Edit:completed as in full song musically-lyrically already great 
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New Lyric Album is underway
I am calling it
Seven Deadly Sins
And guess what, it will contain only 7 songs
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
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Little taste of what is to come
This is Greed
Greed
They just want everything
Greed
Even if thereās nothing left
Greed
They want to take and take and take
Greed
That is their biggest mistake
Greed!
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
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Quality over quantity 
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Seven Deadly Sins Preview so far
Envy 1st Verse
Why does your life look so much better then mine?
I want everything that youāve got
Your job looks so awesome
And the car you drive looks nice
Everything looks perfect
I wished it was mine
Greed 1st Verse
Yo listen
You can take a poor person and they wonāt want anything
But if you ask a rich person and theyāll want everything
How messed up is that the rich is never satisified?
And the poor want nothing is mystified
The rich want to get these poor folk off the streets
But refuse to help them up on their feet
Expressing ātheyāre not contributing to the worldā
But the rich have off shore accounts and the taxman can never tell
The rich is just an example of greed that never stops
Theyāre so rich they can buy off the cops
Pride Chorus
Pride is a prize that canāt be won
Pride is a way of life that wonāt be gone
Pride is an amazing feeling and you will see
That you want to show off your pride just like me
Sloth 1st Verse
I am gonna just laze around
And do nothing at all
Iām just gonna slouch in my chair
And watch my T.V
I am gonna play video games all day long
Pretend to be busy
Iām not gonna answer the door or pick up the phone
Iām gonna act like a sloth
Wrath Chorus
Iām so angry at you and now suffer my wrath
You might think itās a joke, you might laugh
Be warned that once I getting going
What Iāll do, there is no way of knowing
You will feel my wrath
You will fear my wrath
You will feel my wrath, you will fear my wrath, my wrath, MY WRATH!
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
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I Have No Shame
I have no shameā¦
I have no shameā¦
I have no shame, no, no
I have no shameā¦
I am here to say that I donāt give a fuck
Iāll sit here with my middle finger up
Saying I donāt care for him, her and even you
I donāt give a shit about what you say youāll do
I donāt give a damn, canāt you see it on my face
You say that I can easily be replaced
Replace me then, itās no skin off my nose
I donāt give a flying fuck, just so you know
I have no shameā¦
I have no shameā¦
I have no shame, no, no
I have no shameā¦
I have none at all
This is basically me saying fuck you to all of yāall
Iāll flash a moon-y, while putting two fingers up
Sit there and take it, shut the fuck up
Iāll parade it around and shout it out
Everyone will hear what Iām all about
No, this isnāt some sort of game
I am here to say that I have no shame!
I have no shameā¦
I have no shameā¦
I have no shame, no, no
I have no shameā¦
(Instrumental)
I have no shameā¦
I have no shameā¦
I have no shame, no, no
I have no shameā¦
I have no shame (no shame)
I have no shame (no shame)
I have no shame, no, no
I have no shameā¦
One More Time
I just want to go round one more time
I want another go round the farris wheel
I really want have another ride
I want to have another go at life
And maybe I will do it right
If I can just do it one more time
I have made mistakes, that much is clear
But been told that, the only thing to fear is fear
So donāt be scared to take risks, like I once was
If you donāt, youāll regret it, and all will be lost
And youāll be saying just like me
I just want to go round one more time
I want another go round the farris wheel
I really want have another ride
I want to have another go at life
And maybe I will do it right
If I can just do it one more time
I would do better at school, and get decent grades
I would be a better version of the person I am today
Do well and succeed, donāt fail like me
Or youāll get old and look back and see
And youāll be saying just like me
I just want to go round one more time
I want another go round the farris wheel
I really want have another ride
I want to have another go at life
And maybe I will do it right
If I can just do it one more time
(Instrumental)
You donāt want to be saying just like me
I just want to go round one more time
I want another go round the farris wheel
I really want have another ride
I want to have another go at life
And maybe I will do it right
If I can just do it one more time
One more time
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
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Lyrics in the pipeline, tell me what you think.
Crack the whip and learn some discipline
Because hard work is where it all begins
Put your back into whatever youāre trying to achieve
Just remember that all you need to do is believe
Believe you can do it, believe you can reach it
The dreams youāre chasing isnāt just part of a speech
Donāt make it all talk, go get what you deserve
Donāt wait on the side line waiting in reserve
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
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Sounds like a rap. Have you decided on a genre?
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Itās flowing as a rap
So probably like a rap/rock
Not got a title either itās just untitled
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I like it, like the positivity!
Naturally, itās hard to find any rock that isnāt on the dark side lol
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This is a proper āget off your a** and get itā kinda song
I like where this is going. Looking forward to the whole song
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