Yes, totally agree with the content, while reading it it was again that I heard a voice inside my head singing it… style was like Mikes ep… Watching as I fall - and that just happened cause the way you write makes me swing- big compliment 
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This sounds like something off LPUX :)) great job
Back to the roots (this thread) I guess?
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It’s crazy how easy I found writing this without the pressure of having to complete this for one of the days as this took me a good 3 days to complete and I am happy with the final product of this particular song
Yes that is a self confussion that there are a few songs in my 100 day 100 song challenge that i was like ‘yeah that will do!’
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And up we go…
Here is a song from 2015 this is called Kanioz after my best mate and godfather to my son
I wrote the song and struggled for a title and he suggested I name it after him so I did
You cannot save me
My soul’s already condemned
Do not try to fix
What can’t be repaired
I am so tarnished
Ripped from the core
No way to stop it
It can’t be ignored
My blackened heart
Right from the start
Built on my mistakes
My darkened soul
Losing control
Driven by hate
You cannot help me
My heart’s already broke
Don’t try to piece it together
Is there any point, no
I’ve fallen so deep
The black hole swallowing me
The end seems so close
So let the end begin
My blackened heart
Right from the start
Built on my mistakes
My darkened soul
Losing control
Driven by hate
And I know where I’m going (x4)
HELL! AND I KNOW WHERE I’M GOING (x4)
My blackened heart
Right from the start
Built on my mistakes
My darkened soul
Losing control
Driven by hate
My blackened heart
(And I know where I’m going)
Right from the start
(And I know where I’m going)
My darkened soul
(And I know where I’m going)
Losing control
(And I know where I’m going)
HELL!!!
HELL!!!
HELL!!!
ARGH!!! HELL!
The Band
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Enjoy these two little beauties!
I Don't Deserve You
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because I don’t love you as much as you love me
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because you can do so much better
All I ever did was, take you for granted
You stuck by myside thou, I don’t deserve this
I must be handful, diffcult at times
You still hold my hand now, I ask myself why
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
But yet you want to stay
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
And now I have to say
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because I don’t love you as much as you love me
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because you can do so much better then me
All I ever do is, take you for granted
Put my needs first, you don’t deserve this
I know I can get big headed, and like to feed my ego
But you stay by my side, and say that you need me thou
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
But yet you want to stay
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
And now I have to say
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because I don’t love you as much as you love me
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because you can do so much better then me
But you say, you want to stay
Because you love me so
You say, you want to stay
Anywhere as long as you’re with me
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
But yet you want to stay
I haven’t treated you well
Sometimes put you through hell
And now I have to say
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because I don’t love you as much as you love me
I…
Don’t deserve you
Because you can do so much better then me
Voice Control (Working Title)
The voices screaming at me, whispering, am I insane
I can’t stop them speaking to me, haunting, circling my brain
Why the hell won’t it stop, leave me alone, go away
Holding my head in pain, shouting,
But they won’t obey
I am not in control anymore
My demons have taken me down
It’s not something that I can just ignore
It looks like they’re sticking around
The voices telling me things, taunting me, driving me insane
It won’t shut up and leave me be, it’s laughing, circling my brain
Someone please help me stop them, silence them, make them go away
I’m trying to be strong, but they shout at me, it won’t obey
I am not in control anymore
My demons have taken me down
It’s not something that I can just ignore
It looks like they’re sticking around
I’m starting to say, that I am not fine
But the voice in my head is telling me otherwise
The truth is that, if you look at the facts
Is how the voice inside is on the attack
Not stopping, plunging my sanity
I’m losing my grip on my own reality
I bow down, to those voices in my brain
I finally admit to it that maybe I am sane
I am not in control anymore
My demons have taken me down
It’s not something that I can just ignore
It looks like they’re sticking around
The Band
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They’re awesome! I like “I don’t deserve you” very much! that’s one of my favourites… 
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Good songs man. I like Voice Control most. But don’t listen to those voices 
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Every time I read the voice control title I think it’s a rant on how voice control in cars is garbage. 
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They are just awessoomee!! Soo touching 
loved them both!! 
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Here is the inspiration to my own Lullaby song
Lullaby (Version 1)
^^^^^Click Here^^^^^
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Who’s singing?? 
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It’s a pre-recording from the app I use
The chorus inspired a song I wrote by the same name (Lullaby) I also changed my chorus slightly
The way the chorus is sung is the way my song would sound lyrically
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It’s awesome!
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Memory, Memories
Memory…
Memory…
Why do you…
Keep failing me…
Memories…
Memories…
Why do you…
Keep deceiting me
I try to remember,
Something in my past
But you erase it,
Saying it will never last
I have false memories,
That are not my own
You put them there,
Why, I do not know
Memory…
Memory…
Why do you…
Keep failing me…
Memories…
Memories…
Why do you…
Keep deceiting me
I try to forget,
But you force me to remember
About things that have happened,
I question if it did happen ever
I have fake memories,
Planted in my brain
I want to debunk them,
But my mind replays them again
Memory…
Memory…
Why do you…
Keep failing me…
Memories…
Memories…
Why do you…
Keep deceiting me
MEMORY! MEMORY!
WHY WON’T YOU JUST LET ME BE!
MEMORIES! MEMORIES!
WHY PROJECT ON ME FORCEFULLY!
Memory…
Memory…
Why do you…
Keep failing me…
Memories…
Memories…
Why do you…
Keep deceiting me
Standing With The Darkness
Cast a shadow of uncertainty
Blind the light aggresively
Bind the black embracing it
With eyes wide shut facing it
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
The pitch black void
Cannot be destoryed
We have tried so many times
Fall down the hole
With no control
It’s out of our hands
Light cannot reach
Darkness un-breached
Might as well accept it
Dawn fades to dusk
The night erupts
Growing stronger each day
Cast a shadow of uncertainty
Blind the light aggresively
Bind the black embracing it
With eyes wide shut facing it
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
The deep empty abyss
No running from it
It keeps catching up all the time
Shine the light
To help win the fight
But the dark is far to strong
Hide from it
Try and avoid it
It will find us even at the best of times
Dawn fades to dusk
The night erupts
Growing stronger each day
Cast a shadow of uncertainty
Blind the light aggresively
Bind the black embracing it
With eyes wide shut facing it
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
(Instrumental)
Dawn fades to dusk
The night erupts
Growing stronger each day
Cast a shadow of uncertainty
Blind the light aggresively
Bind the black imbracing it
With eyes wide shut facing it
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
Oh…(x3)
Standing with the darkness
The Band
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I may or may not add to IGNO
I've Got No Opinion
It doesn’t matter what I think anymore,
Nobody wants to listen to what I’ve got to say
My opinion doesn’t count for anything
So maybe I should just keep my mouth shut
I got asked what I think about something the other day
I thought that it was a bad idea and that is what I say
I say that we can’t do it, there is too many variables involved
They say we should come together to get this resolved
But by the time we even had a chance to talk, the decision is already made
Like it didn’t make any difference what I had to say
My mind was made up for me and now I have no choice
What good is speaking up when I don’t seem to have a voice
It doesn’t matter what I think anymore,
Nobody wants to listen to what I’ve got to say
My opinion doesn’t count for anything
So maybe I should just keep my mouth shut
Somebody I Used To Know
You are nothing but a memory
Of someone that used to be
A friend, but no longer seem so
You’re somebody I used to know
We were once, very good friends
But something happened, and now we’re not
We still say hi in passing, just not to seem rude
The honesty of it all is that time pulled us apart
You are nothing but a memory
Of someone that used to be
A friend, but no longer seem so
You’re somebody I used to know
I look you up on facebook, just to see how you are
'Hey, long time no speak, how are you?"
“How is life treating you these days?”
These are the usual questions I always ask
But the truth is you’re just someone I used to know in my past
You are nothing but a memory
Of someone that used to be
A friend, but no longer seem so
You’re somebody I used to know
(Instrumental)
You are nothing but a memory
Of someone that used to be
A friend, but no longer seem so
You’re somebody I used to know
Who Am I?
I’ve got no identity, no status, no reputation
I need someone to help me with this situatuion
Because I don’t know who I am
I try to remember when I can
Sometimes its no use, it don’t change a thing
Somehow I have to find a way to re-begin
I have begun from somewhere before
How hard can it be, only one way to know for sure
Even though I want to start again, I can’t help but feel
That this new version of me isn’t really real
So I ask myself
Who Am I?
I don’t really know
I’ve asked myself so many times
Who Am I?
Who am I supposed to be
When I’m no longer feeling like me
Who Am I?..
I’ve got no identity, no status, no reputation
Stuck in my own head, facing this complication
I look in the mirror and hardly reconize myself
I look back at how hard things sometimes felt
Not really knowing who I am or where I am going
The fear of doubt has no way of slowing
The easiest solution would be to just start again
But the new version doesn’t feel real when I ask
Who Am I?
I don’t really know
I’ve asked myself so many times
Who Am I?
Who am I supposed to be
When I’m no longer feeling like me
Who Am I?..
I don’t understand myself
(Who am I?)
I don’t know what I’ve become
(Who am I?)
I’m just another version of me
(Who am I?)
Who am I? Who am I?
WHO AM I!!!
Who Am I?
I don’t really know
I’ve asked myself so many times
Who Am I?
Who am I supposed to be
When I’m no longer feeling like me
Who Am I?..
The Band
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Hi @acemasters … it’s so long reading your work i just got an email of your tag and felt like reading it… great as always… it’s really so touchy … i like who am i? … I’ve got no opinion 
Keep creations alive! 
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Proud daddy moment when my 6 year old son said he is writing a song and come up with this!
Lyrics written by my 6 year old son
Translation:
Rhythm in my head
Rhythm in my toes
Makes me want to dance round and round
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That’s so cute 
Congrats on his first song 
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