@rorybourdon read above post
Youāre great and your living my dream I always wanted to be a songwriter since I was 5
@turners34
I came across song writing by mere accident
I was bored at work one day and began writing
Wrote my first piece Questions (which can be found in the Baracks somewhere either as its own topic and in a topic i called Mastermind)
But after that and the next few that followed I discovered that I like writing songs and never looked back!
I have been writing for almost 15 years
Best Lyrics ever
What a rhyme!! I loved the rap sooooo much!!
Thatās sooo long! I did knew that! So good to see ya continuing
Great work Ace, thats a real fast one- feeling the rythm like pumping with a very great chorus which sounded melodic to me while reading the lines!
While writing the above I thought again- and sorry if I repeat myself- that this is your biggest talent, to make the people feel a flow in the way you add your words one to the other- awesome work- great x-mas present and unexpected- that melted me rn - happy holidays to you and your family
Nicely written! I feel some lines are heavily inspired by LP, such as this one:
My favorite lines are these:
Haha. Just in case, Iām not saying thatās bad!
I love to write songs it helps me deal with my problems and music just helps me fell better
News for you lovely lot
Track names of songs to come in the new year
A Little Crazy Inside
I Donāt Think So
Iām After You
My Loneliness
Slowly Killing Me
The Truth About Lies
This War I Fight
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
I look forward to these the most, but Iāll probably be reading every single one as always
Yeah! Looking forward to The Truth About Lies too!
Looking forward to this
This
and
This
Iām pretty sure all of it will be brilliant, just you always do )))
Sounds great! Eager for the completion
I love it
Greatš
I donāt get it
People that pretend to like me
Then talk about me just to spite me
Speak about how iām this and that
To my face theyāre like āwe got your backā
But like fuck do they
I have sussed out the fakes and weeded out āthe mistakesā
The liars and cheats, whos record to me is stuck on repeat
Dishing out excuses, but there is no justifying
As the depth of the hole you dig is consistantly multiplying
If you donāt like me, thatās fine
Donāt pretend to like me, if thatās a lie
Cut the crap and letās get real
Come on and tell me how you really feel
I donāt understand
These people who go around like theyāre my best mate
But go around to others spreading how much they hate
Iād have more respect for you if you say it to my face
Iād rather hear it from you in the first place
But like fuck do they
They donāt seem to have the bottle, to say what they are thinking at all
Rather go behind my back, talking about how Iām this and that
Dishing out excuses, but there is no justifying
As the depth of the hole you dig is consistantly multiplying
If you donāt like me, thatās fine
Donāt pretend to like me, if thatās a lie
Cut the crap and letās get real
Come on and tell me how you really feel
If I donāt like you, youāre gonna know about it
Donāt pretend to like me, when you just deny it
If I donāt like you, youāre gonna know about it
Donāt pretend to like me, when you just deny it
If you donāt like me, thatās fine
Donāt pretend to like me, if thatās a lie
Cut the crap and letās get real
Come on and tell me how you really feel
(Repeat once)
Donāt pretend to like me
Donāt pretend to like meeeeeeeee
(Repeat once)
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Another master peiece you have a wonderful gift for writing you gave me joy and inspiration with your work your a wonderful writer so never quit