The Unity of us: Unite and take over!

[GioS]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

first biuld up (melodic sing)
@gatsie

[theearlywalker]

@NickGr

Ace loves everything max cleaned

Does he? Lol- I love when he tells me what to do @acemasters - sorry for this messy thread and all the posts inbetween- I will catch up the song inbetween if it gets too confusing

@rickvanmeijel

@theearlywalker 's story will probably inspire my lines

Yeah - that was exactly my intention- nice you feel it …

@NickGr

Mike has bought our merch

It was exactly the other way round- since it’s the show I love the most- he and hos tee inspirated me to do this title - thanx @Mike

@NoireXJasper

(Must avoid discussion here. )

Loool lmao… feel free man

And you all did a great work on the lyrics, @lp13413 and @rickvanmeijel and the other music making soldiers- maybe you have an idea for a melody while reading the lines??? Would be niiice…

[rickvanmeijel]

Haha not yet, but it shouldn’t be too difficult to create one

[mish3lka]

@GioS

But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

These lines are so good! Love them!

[acemasters]

All I care about is the song looking tidy

When the song has no spaces and is wrote like an essay and its hard to figure out where the breaks are

HOWEVER

I did create a Unity of Us Discussion topic and would be favourable to do all our talking there and keep these post for the song

[theearlywalker]

Alright, silence inhere, soldiers- and all further discussion here:

The Unity of Us, Nominations and Discussions

Ok band so we are back with a bang And we have a couple of changes to the line-up I would like to introduce our new lyric mates @NoireXJasper and @Honey8 With the introductions out the way this particular topic will be for ALL the nominations and nomination polls Allows the forum to stay clean So for our new song we need to come up with a A Song Title and a Genre to comply with example My nomination for our next song is The Blame Game - Nu-Metal/ Rock-Rap The Band @jabinquaken @the_ter…

And here’s the song so far ;

@GioS

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel [quote=“theearlywalker, post:1, topic:34394, full:true”]

first biuld up (melodic sing) 1 line each
@Gatsie
@AJ_7
@yomarques

Chorus (1 or 2 lines- powerful)
jabinquaken
rckvanmeijel
NoireXJasper

verse 3 (one line)
yomarques
nickGr
agusbianco
honey8
acemasters
gioS

…

[gatsie]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:
As night turns into day

@AJ_7

[AJ_7]

I will do mine tomorrow!

@theearlywalker we are so glad to have you back!

[AJ_7]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
@yomarques

[rickvanmeijel]

I’m getting massive Rage Against the Machine / Prophets of Rage vibes from these lyrics, awesome!

[yomarques]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus (1 or 2 lines - Powerful)
@jabinquaken

[jabinquaken]

Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!

I’m rocking onto my own way

I’m with my homies you better move over

As we unite and take over

Verse 2:

You brought me down so many times

And I will take you down this time

Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade

And each one always made me feel eviscerate

But mess with me, and you mess with all

Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:

As night turns into day

We grow more and more united

It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:
Hear us loud from all around!
@rickvanmeijel

[rickvanmeijel]

@jabinquaken

Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!

I’m rocking onto my own way

I’m with my homies you better move over

As we unite and take over

Verse 2:

You brought me down so many times

And I will take you down this time

Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade

And each one always made me feel eviscerate

But mess with me, and you mess with all

Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:

As night turns into day

We grow more and more united

It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:

Hear us loud from all around!

There’s no time to be safe and sound

@NoireXJasper your turn

[NickGr]

Tiding it up a little…

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse II:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:
Hear us loud from all around!
There’s no time to be safe and sound

@NoireXJasper your turn

[NoireXJasper]

Imma working on it but not this time. So much to do this day. Trying my best to take my turn as soon as possible.

[Honey8]

@acemasters … just to inform you that @NoireXJasper needs a bit more time to take his turn. He is a bit busy…

[NoireXJasper]

Alright…

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse II:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:
Hear us loud from all around!
There’s no time to be safe and sound
Let’s unite and take over the ground!

Verse III:
@yomarques

[yomarques]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse II:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build-up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:
Hear us loud from all around!
There’s no time to be safe and sound
Let’s unite and take over the ground!

Verse III:
I’m over all those darkest days
@NickGr

[NickGr]

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse II:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

1st Build-up:
As night turns into day
We grow more and more united
It’s time for us to make you pay

Chorus:
Hear us loud from all around!
There’s no time to be safe and sound
Let’s unite and take over the ground!

Verse III:
I’m over all those darkest days
So now for you it isn’t safe
@agusdbianco

[gatsie]

@NickGr

Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!

Is it just me, or does this line make you feel like you’ve wandered into a dirty alley… ?