Let’s write a long poem together. Everyone gets to post a line [sentence] that preferably rhymes with the previous post and so on. Ok here goes, I’ll started:
Everything you say to me,
Let’s write a long poem together. Everyone gets to post a line [sentence] that preferably rhymes with the previous post and so on. Ok here goes, I’ll started:
Everything you say to me,
Takes me one step closer to the edge…
That doesn’t really rhyme
Yeah, after I post it and then went back to the home page I was like ‘ohhhhhh’.
Welllllll only one thing to do…
(Snaps @Gatsie neck)
(Snaps @TripleXero neck)
Everything you say to me…
You need a little bit of @chesterbe…
is making me more clear to see
Who you’re truly meant to be…
ot hi eva, good morning @evooba
ot 2:@Gatsie if we go on with rhyming on e, it´s boring, can we make also double sentences which fits in a rhythm or so?
For example right no
… so what You make me going thrue, may not be my own bad rule…
and who you’re meant to be nobody
@Gatsie How many lines before a chorus and how many lines in a chorus? Also, when does the bridge come in?
But all I ever see is just another lemon tree
[OT
Dude, its an ongoing poem. It’s not a song. So to come up with a chorus and bridge I think would be a bit… Difficult.?.
It’s more tricky if everyone is only allowed to add one line at a time. It of course requires patience
Of course, one line or sentence can be as long as you please. Just as long as it is one line… ]
Sorry, my bad. All the other posts make it sound like a song.
Poems and songs have similarities indeed.
So I’m gonna drink my tea in peace…
And then I remembered that coffee was at least five times better than tea.
(‘least’ was the closest I got to a rhyme for peace).
As I feel the sunshine fall down on me…
While sitting in the porch, under a tree…
[This part seems to be a rap to me]
watchin’ it burn down in front of me
Sweeping fallen leaves…
…as my dream dies, and the eternal pain lives.
This gives myself some kind of hope