Nicely done thanks for sharing
Getting ready for to you devour
Pulling me in with your evil power
Haunting my soul every hour
You’re tormenting me
Connoting me with your evil spell
With my life at the bottom of a well
Stolen from me
Ripped from right undernenth
And every second it’s harder to breath
It’s getting harder to stay awake
And even harder to stay in my earlier state
It’s getting harder to find a reason for me to stay
It’s getting darker for me in the day
With a dark cloud following me wherever I go
With my soul and heart being stabbed with the end of a bow
I can’t go on like this anymore
I only see my life is a never ending chore
And the light and will has burned out
Hoping I can find a new route
Because I have this fear
And I am crying out every tear
I have loss all my will
And pain is all I feel
And my heart will never heal
Ready to step into the fire
Because I am handing on a wire
And I am losing my grip
And now I am about to hit
for two weeks this all i have if anyone would like to help me with this i would really appreciate it
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Nice to read another piece from you!
I can’t be of help though… to me it’s good the way it is… 
But you are held back, and are told to sit
Why are you isolating yourself in a pit?
Grab this candle and have it lit
A helping hand is within reach
Let me throw some wisdom at you through this speech
Where I will help you bleach
The darkness and turn it to white
And with this wisdom you may just smite
All these demons, and everything will be alright
The darkness will be consumed by the light
Go on, don’t be in fright
I’ll give you a hand to make things right
Let those begotten thoughts leave your mind
They are not you, but are behind
All your sadness, don’t be confined
Let the mental torture escape
Let your power and will take shape
Aren’t you curious as to what’s behind the drape?
Best i could come up with. You are getting better @StephLP18 keep it up!
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And We all will fall
You can get back up or put another brick in the wall
We all felt like We were no good
But that’s not the way it should
We all have a gift
But it’s your choice to let lift
Let your heart be your guide
because that’s were the love lays
It can break though any stone
Cause its stronger then any bone
Let it lift you through the dark
And it wouldn’t break you apart
We all will fall
You can get back up or put another brick in the wall
We all felt like We were no good
But that’s not the way it should
We all have a gift
But it’s your choice to let lift
Even though people may try
Your heart will get you by
It will pull you through
Even when you’re blue
It will be your light
That will win you every fight
We all will fall
But you can stand up or put another brick in the wall
We all felt we were no good
But that isn’t the way it should
We all have a gift
Your choice to let lift
There will be times you feel you can’t go on
but you don’t have to that con
It wants your identity
But you don’t have to listen to the emeny
We all will fall
But you can stand up or put another brick in the wall
We all felt like we were no good
But that isn’t the way it should
We all have a gift
Your choice to let it lift
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Sorry haven’t done one lately been busy with school
Look at the pain
I am flushing down the drain
but theirs one thing that still remains
The time I have lost
Letting pain be my boss
And not thinking about the cost
I let control me entirety
And I never faced the reality
I let darkness be my leader but now I have to take it with a beater
Times I get sick
And I just want to quit
Because laying down
Is easier then facing the sound
Now you have the srowd
That can cut though the thick black cord
It will put up a fight
But you must give all Your might
It may get rough
But you have to be though
You better run with The knife
For it may save your life
You want to forget but it can’t be unseen
But you the strength to fight in your genes
There will be times you want to lay and rest
But you can’t because life is a quest
And though it will be easier to flight
You know in your heart that isn’t right
In the end everyday you get a desicon
Make sure it’s the one that’s not going to put you In prison
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Nicely written!
Here’s a biiiiiig warm hug to you!! 
Hope you’re doing fine, unless the sad lyric…
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Seems cool. But can you play it for us 
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You’re seriously getting better with each song! This one almost has a story, from a dark place to a stronger mindset
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(breaks glass bottle) sing it!!! D:<
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I have an awful singing voice or I would
Trust me, there are worst singers out there, just look at mainstream artists for example. They all use autotune and sound HORRENDOUS Live xD
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You just have to believe in yourself a bit more. Back in pre-historic LPU days, when there WAS an actual chat, I would go on cam and just goof around and sometimes sing. People liked it, and that’s when I started diving into song writing, Originally i was going to sing, but since my friends are more into Rap/Hip-Hop I went that route, now that I have more confidence in my voice, I’m taking it to the next level and SINGING is a main part of it xD.
Not the best voice, but hey, if people are receptive to my words and voice, then why not?
How about i try to sing a song Just for you and you can be the judge how bad it is
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