I am sure many of the peeps would like that! It’s all about the technique really, vocalizing it in your mind how you want it to sound. Let’s take for example a snippet of a song I wrote below, took a while for me to figure it out, but I think it will work. Though this is still a work in progress 
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Have been busy lately with my final year of high school
But I should be able to post a song I did here shortly
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V1
I am just st a girl form Ohio
Always looking to tomorrow
Now I am here on the stage
Singing out my rage
Pre C
Am up here taking a risk
Shaking form my foot to my wrist
But I have clutched into a fist
C
I have been told what to do for far to long
So now I am here singing this song
The words I sing are pure
With music being my only cure
V2
Now I push my self though
So I can show what I do
I ran away form fear with a blink of an eye
And let go all the way to the sky
Bridge
I take words and make them art
And using music to bring me out the dark
Sorry for the wait
And I personally think this is one of my weaker songs I have written
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It’s a rap song! 
well…yeah, not my favourite between yours,but keep going!! 
Right…
Firstly wow, you have a great passion for lyric writing
Just keep writing, even if you think it is rubbish, keep it. Use that as fuel
What i would say do what i do, write a bunch of songs and post them in drop down menus making it easier
And have two topics one for unfinished stuff and one for finished stuff
But as for the actual song writing you have some great stuff
On the subject of song writing, looking at your mums poem and your version its like two people writing something to each other its pretty good how they kinda go hand in hand, i wouldnt say one is better then the other, i would say the co-exsist side by side
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Thanks for your words. @acemasters
And I am going to up a new thread for my unfinished stuff shortly
So thanks for that suggestion
And maybe one some time me and you could work on a song together
And my passion comes from me wanting a career in music and linkin park and Chris Cornell were my biggest impersonation for music
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It is short and simple but I feel it can go on longer. What I myself do when songwriting, if I get some verse ideas ANYWHERE, I’ll jot them down right there and then.
Then once I have a collection of 6 or more, I tend to either continue from there or, see if it coexists (or makes sense) with something else written on that “idea wall”. A song I wrote was pretty much just all just jot-downs.
Have you tried doing different types of rhyming patterns? I think experimenting with this and style the rhyme is done helps also.
Just keep your head at it and I’m sure you can achieve anything you want in this life. Will it and strive for it, you have great potential 
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I would concider it an honour
I will let you direct the direct etc so just email me when you want acemasters84@gmail.com
V1.
Walking on a double edge sword
My voice tied with a cord
This life I can’t afford
With the lies I hoard
Chours
Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand
V2.
I try to see a fantasy
Because I can’t deal with reality
Its driving me insane
Like finding a rainbow in the rain
Chours
Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand
Bridge
Cause everything i thouch
Turns into a speck of dust
Chours
Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand
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me!
Nice lyric! 
Shell in my back
V1.
Stuck inside a lucid dream
Thoughts tearing at the seems
Death running through my head
My heart stabbed with a theard
Looking for a way out
But i am still facing doubt
chorus
Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack
V2.
About to take the jump
Cause no one gives a fuck
I have unhealable wounds
My end is coming soon
chorus
Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack
Bridge
Crucifying agony
Disturbing stainty
chorus
Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack
V3.
there was no warning or sign
demons at me all the time
My life in jeopardy
So burn the memory
chorus
Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack
V4.
All the wrong
is now gone
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Well written! I really like the way you end the chorus with these lines
I’d call this song Shell In My Back 
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The past you can’t change
But the future is your control
The days will range
You have to keep yourself whole
There will be times you will fall
But you have to get up
Even if it’s just a crawl
See a half full cup
Put one foot in front
Let that one lead
Go for the crazy stint
Because this what you need
Fuck everyone else in the room
Take that leap of faith
You will defeat this doom
You have the strength to win the race
You may just be at the start
But you must look ahead
Because you got in your heart
You will eventually hit the red
You may face a crack
But you have keep pushing through
Overcome the setbacks
Because this 100 percent you
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Strong song this time! 
nicely written!
Hello all. I think all the songs are great . I can relate to some things in them myself You do a very good job in my eyes @ STEPHLP18 Thank you for continuing to share them 
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Start again
V1.
I am not feeding into the addiction
Or there self infliction
There’s a storm brewing
And a tale of undoing
Chorus.
Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains
V2.
Years I was a walking shadow
With tons of unwanted cargo
Now that you’re crossing a line
The time has come to refine
Chours.
Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains
V3.
Let go of pain
Or live in vain
Now that you have arrived
Your life is really for a revise
chours.
Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains
V4.
I am ready to feel
Love that’s real
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Great song! What are you gonna call it?