Falling back Vol. II - The Unity of us

I forced myself to clean up the thread, to get the right spirit back!

There we go

Verse 1:
@NickGr
Line 2:
@theearlywalker
Line 3:
@acemasters
Line 4:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 5:
@the_termin8r
Line 6:
@gatsie

Pre-Chorus:
Line 1:
@jabinquaken
Line 2:
@AJ_7

Chorus:
Line 1:
@the_termin8r
Line 2:
@NickGr
Line 3:
@jabinquaken
Line 4:
@gatsie

Verse 2:
Line 1:
@theearlywalker
Line 2:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 3:
@AJ_7
Line 4:
@acemasters
Line 5:
@the_termin8r
Line 6:
@jabinquaken
Line 7:
@gatsie

Pre-chorus(I think it would be the same as the first one, but I’ll accept any ideas)

Chorus 2:
Line 1:
@AJ_7
Line 2:
@theearlywalker
Line 3:
@the_termin8r
Line 4:
@gatsie
Line 5:
@acemasters

Bridge:
Line 1:
@theearlywalker
Line 2:
@NickGr
Line 3:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 4:
@AJ_7

Chorus 2(let it stay the same, but let’s add a couple of lines)
Line 6:
@jabinquaken
Line 7:
@NickGr

The progres so far:
Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken

Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say

Next to go:
Pre-Chorus:
Line 1:
@jabinquaken

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The air is caving in around me again

@AJ_7

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Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins

@the_termin8r (Chorus, line 1)

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@the_termin8r it looks like its your turn hehe

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He said he maybe needs a while this time, Anyways we call him in till he comes in :joy: @the_termin8r

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Oops, forgot sorry. I’ll post when I get home.

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Bday line :)?

Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say

Pre-Chorus:

The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins

Chorus:

I’m falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow

@NickGr

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Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say
Pre-Chorus:

The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins
Chorus:

I’m falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow
There’s no hope for better tomorrow
@jabinquaken

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we call him in? :eyes: ? @jabinquaken core soldiers in mood flow <3

My eyes can’t see through world so black

@gatsie next line is yours

I think I got a title for the next vote: delay again lol

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@theearlywalker read your mail.


@gatsie :joy:

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In this endless vicious cycle, I’m falling back

You go:
@theearlywalker

[OT: Sorry guys, was a weird weekend]

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Love the chorus to this…

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[quote=“gatsie, post:14, topic:21987, full:true”]

It feels like I am supposed to be
:

@rickvanmeijel

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@rickvanmeijel

your turn

Someone else who I don’t wanna be

@AJ_7

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Someone that is not me

@acemasters

Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say

The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins

I’m falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow
There’s no hope for better tomorrow
My eyes can’t see through world so black
In this endless vicious cycle, I’m falling back

It feels like I am supposed to be
Someone else who I don’t wanna be
Someone that isn’t me
I’m falling back into the same old routine
@the_termin8r

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