Thank you soo much @theearlywalker . Glad you liked it. Very happy it reminded you of Mike’s rap. Thanks for the compliment 
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Damn, this forum is glitching. This thread just came back up on my thread list. I thought it had been deleted or something.
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Oh. Maybe some work must be going on… same like this happened with me for Spanish classes…
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Here’s the next one. I wrote and posted yesterday on my website but then was quite tired and sleepy. Here it is today. Completely on personal experience but still i hope y’all will be able to connect with it 
Hell vs Life
Everyday feels like kinda same
Nothing so great to rejuvenate
Everything i do feels like insane
Like doing for someone else’s sake
I wanna get a time machine
And go back in those lovely days
Where all was so right as nature
Those memories I got to embrace
But then suddenly this changed
Felt like i am dying inside
Felt like someone is suffocating me
Till extent and living in pride
I guess the hell is better
At least you know all’s gonna be wrong
At Least you prepare yourself
To fight and be a bit strong
Here life threatens with spears
Knifes and spikes on throat
Then disappears like a nightmare
Leaving you weak and alone
It gives you most painful scars
Scars almost unbearable
But you do fight them, Don’t know why
And continue a meaningless life
These were my thoughts before
Before this day, my friend
Before, when everything was wrong
Before , when i was suffering in pain
Then last evening while returning home
There was something i sensed
I wish i had sensed it before
Cause there were new thoughts commenced.
I could see Phosphenes from my eyes
Waking up from an intense dream
That was an epiphany to my life
That surrounded me with serene
Life threatens is sagacious truth
But it does give amazing moments
It threatens to make you stronger
Providing a lear with every pain
It teaches us something new
Something never experienced
Something which you’ve never heard
It persuades you to be persistent
My friend, life is an adventure
To quench our thrills and joy
To savour its each flavour
Give up thoughts which annoy
Enjoy that every struggle
Feel that every pain
Grasp that every teaching
I assure it isn’t in vain
You’re given this life cause
You’re strong enough to live it
Every heart is strong enough
To neglect and forget to QUIT!
@acemasters
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@gatsie
@rickvanmeijel
@AJ_7
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@theearlywalker
@the_termin8r
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@GioS
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@lpfan61
@mishelka3
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@LPUgrl2 @danni1317 @yolo5494 (if you 3 would like to be tagged then please tell )
@georkost
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This one feels just… amazing and letting go
let it goooo
And yeah, you’re a master of ballad style… I’m not so good at it
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This… 
Very well written! 
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Thanks @NickGr i am glad you liked it Thanks a lot for the compliments Aye! I m not so great in it. But just progressing
I appreciate it friend. Thanks for the compliment 
Edit: there are still many threads to be checked, i will do that soon.
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you’re welcome!
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My comments late. I like analyse what I read.
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Wow great stuff!
At first I thought it was really dark but then you ended it on a more positive note
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I haven’t read through all of them yet but your writing is amazing! 
Love the first two that you had posted.
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Yep. I always try to make like that… the starting lines were my experiences… then ended up with something inspiring… Thanks for you lovely words 
Thanks friend! Glad you liked it
Thanks a lot dear friend. I will tag you in every Ballad so that you don’t miss any if you want. Thanks for those lovely words
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love it, gives lots of positive energy Love your work Honey
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Thanks dear friend.
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This is so deep and well written. The flow is just amazing, the dark beginning, the beautiful awakening in the middle, a really meaningful message in the end. Thank you for sharing such great work with us, @Honey8. You’re amazing!
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Aw thanks dear friend . I have another one in progress which i will post probably today… It has kinda same style… dark to inspiring…
Glad you like it!
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Now this is called exam ending celebration 
here’s the next ballad
Special thanks to @acemasters for helping in some lines and the title. 🙋
WIPING AWAY MY PAIN
I am just a human being here
Who’s completely lost, sheddin’ tears
Would you like to hear my story
Of all my fights, my struggles and lost glory?
I walked through a lot of pain
Struggled every day and night for gain
Now i see what i got is nothing
Every second of pain was just in vain
Why did all this happen?
What else does life wants me to do!
And now i am so broken
Oh pain! I am sitting beside you
I have failed and everything went waste
Monachopsis is what surrounds me
My fight epoch constantly stares
And Phosphenes are just what i see
I feel i’m in the middle of a ocean every day
I feel i’m in the middle of a desert every night
There’s no peace and comfort in sight
I need hope to lead me from wrong to right
This fight! Oh I fought with all my might
To be honest my mind wasn’t alright
It always thought about the pain inspite
Of me trying to control and guide
Yes it all happens inside your head
What the head thinks that’s gonna be instead
Of what you want and trying to see
Believe me, this way you’ll never be free
Your mind controls a lot everyday
Works throughout the day, thinking about pain
Give it a break don’t let much strain
Let the birds sing and call the rain
So stand up! Let’s get out of this
Stuck in oceans and desert beneath
We make us, we save us
We fight us, we find us
Put that old brain in the trash
Who has negetivity with no flash
Who is completely dark inside
Taking you away from your plight
We live our own lives
We don’t need those empty policies
And we’ve got no apologies
For being who we are today
So say hey! And get your brain
A nice sweet holiday to change
Don’t be mistaken, its completely yours
Be original to live those cures
With this change now start a new game
Lend blind eyes to money and fame
Let your heart speak and do the same
In one life live all your dreams
@jabinquaken , @gatsie , @rickvanmeijel , @AJ_7 , @georkost , @NickGr , @NoireXJasper , @theearlywalker , @the_termin8r
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Like I’ve been saying - a masterpiece of ballad!
I like the sense and the spirit of… like getting up. Always loved these type of lyrics
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