Creations - Honey8

The Barracks
#101

Thanks @NickGr i am glad you liked it :smile: Thanks a lot for the compliments :hugs: Aye! I m not so great in it. But just progressing :slight_smile:

I appreciate it friend. Thanks for the compliment :smiley:

Edit: there are still many threads to be checked, i will do that soon.

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#102

:smile: you’re welcome! :hugs:

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#103

My comments late. I like analyse what I read.

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#104

Wow great stuff!
At first I thought it was really dark but then you ended it on a more positive note

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#105

Great job @Honey8! Very well done!

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#106

I haven’t read through all of them yet but your writing is amazing! :heart: Love the first two that you had posted.

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#107

Yep. I always try to make like that… the starting lines were my experiences… then ended up with something inspiring… Thanks for you lovely words :upside_down_face::upside_down_face::wink:

Thanks friend! Glad you liked it :hugs:

Thanks a lot dear friend. I will tag you in every Ballad so that you don’t miss any if you want. Thanks for those lovely words :hugs::hugs:

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#108

love it, gives lots of positive energy :slight_smile: Love your work Honey :heart:

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#109

Thanks dear friend. :hugs::hugs:

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#110

This is so deep and well written. The flow is just amazing, the dark beginning, the beautiful awakening in the middle, a really meaningful message in the end. Thank you for sharing such great work with us, @Honey8. You’re amazing!

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#111

Aw thanks dear friend :hugs::hugs::hugs: . I have another one in progress which i will post probably today… It has kinda same style… dark to inspiring…

Glad you like it! :hugs:

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#112

Now this is called exam ending celebration :confetti_ball::tada: here’s the next ballad :upside_down_face:
Special thanks to @acemasters for helping in some lines and the title. 🙋

WIPING AWAY MY PAIN

I am just a human being here
Who’s completely lost, sheddin’ tears
Would you like to hear my story
Of all my fights, my struggles and lost glory?

I walked through a lot of pain
Struggled every day and night for gain
Now i see what i got is nothing
Every second of pain was just in vain

Why did all this happen?
What else does life wants me to do!
And now i am so broken
Oh pain! I am sitting beside you

I have failed and everything went waste
Monachopsis is what surrounds me
My fight epoch constantly stares
And Phosphenes are just what i see

I feel i’m in the middle of a ocean every day
I feel i’m in the middle of a desert every night
There’s no peace and comfort in sight
I need hope to lead me from wrong to right

This fight! Oh I fought with all my might
To be honest my mind wasn’t alright
It always thought about the pain inspite
Of me trying to control and guide

Yes it all happens inside your head
What the head thinks that’s gonna be instead
Of what you want and trying to see
Believe me, this way you’ll never be free

Your mind controls a lot everyday
Works throughout the day, thinking about pain
Give it a break don’t let much strain
Let the birds sing and call the rain

So stand up! Let’s get out of this
Stuck in oceans and desert beneath
We make us, we save us
We fight us, we find us

Put that old brain in the trash
Who has negetivity with no flash
Who is completely dark inside
Taking you away from your plight

We live our own lives
We don’t need those empty policies
And we’ve got no apologies
For being who we are today

So say hey! And get your brain
A nice sweet holiday to change
Don’t be mistaken, its completely yours
Be original to live those cures

With this change now start a new game
Lend blind eyes to money and fame
Let your heart speak and do the same
In one life live all your dreams

@jabinquaken , @gatsie , @rickvanmeijel , @AJ_7 , @georkost , @NickGr , @NoireXJasper , @theearlywalker , @the_termin8r

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#113

Like I’ve been saying - a masterpiece of ballad!
I like the sense and the spirit of… like getting up. Always loved these type of lyrics

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#114

@framos1792 , @ironsoldier16 , @GioS , @aaran , @lpfan61 , @mishelka3 , @jessiee76 @LPUgrl2 @danni1317
Next ballad is ready, the above post :slightly_smiling_face:

Thanks nick. Glad you liked it :upside_down_face:

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#115

Best part right here. Once again I like how this went from dark to hopeful lyrics. Also, this seemed more like a grand poem than usual lyrics. Nice work :grinning:

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#116

Why upside down? :joy::hugs: I really love your ballads

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#117

Yeah!! Fight!! :muscle: :grin:
Nice lyric! I feel energy through your words… well done! :smile: :hugs:

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#118

I loved both of them :slight_smile: you did a great job again :revolving_hearts::revolving_hearts::revolving_hearts::revolving_hearts:

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#119

Beautiful…somehow the very last line stuck in my head, simple yet profound when you think of it

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#120

Wow such an amazing song that i see it came form your heart

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