Not you, pendejo XD the bat you gifted me for my birthday 
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Oof! You got a thread I donāt even know! 
@anna834 i read the second post of this topicā¦ Itās a good way to just let out everything you have in mindā¦ 
hereās a hug for youā¦ you are strong and loved. Feel free to share anything hereā¦ your writings are quite intense 
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So. The objection for the dog tax bill is written. Now I treat myself with writing a story for you.
It has happened once I was released from the hospital after the treatment of the pathological vomiting. (More to that, you find in the tag topic)
I was five months pregnant then, not showing yet and finally out of this horrible time. But my stomach was still shaky and I had to eat constantly somthing, mostly carrots.
It was autumn and we planned vacation with my family in the south of Germany.
Our car at that time was a Nissan Micra, a really uncomfortable tiny car for someone as tall as I am.
Now with my husband, son, mother in law, dog and luggage, it was packed.
We started after dinner.
And cause I hadnāt enough room and my stomach was still wobbly, I couldnāt really digest the meal. Heavy cramps started hitting me.
So my husband stopped at the next restarea. One of this places along the highway with just two toilet cabins for every gender.
I did find a tree with a branch, I could hang on. With circling my pelvis I tried to get the digestion started again. The cramps were that hard that I had to yell in pain.
My mother in low stayed with our son.
My husband tried to find out where we exactly were, so he could call an ambulance.
But finally it loosened and I could go to the restroom.
Still I had to breath heavily and moan in pain.
Meanwhile a busload of teenage students arrived. The girls queued up, soon annoyed about just one free toilet cabin.
They started bumping at my door, and giggled a lot about the noise they could hear from me.
But what could I do.
Finally, I was finished. Stood up to get my pants back on.
In that moment, the carrot dropped out of my pocket, rolled under the cabin door between the girls.
This nicely formed carrot.
Immediately utterly silence.
ā¦
And I had to leave this cabin.
Walk between staring, deathly silent girls, wash my hands.
As the door closed behind me, an uproar of voices and laughter.
And yes, I left the carrot where it was.
Whom to tag?
@Fravaco I think you will love this story 
@Lilyope
@theearlywalker
@anomalia
@anngelenee
@drounzer
@birdy1989
@LP13413
@zanybelle
@rickvanmeijel
Oh, ten already, maybe later more
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lmao - thanx for the tagā¦ I can barley imagine how bad it must have been back then but the ending releases the tension you got the reader in - empathetic with you and the cramps, the pain and the whole horrible situation somewhere in the nowhere- already enough for a horror story- and the toilet situation with the worst thing to happen on top- a bus full of gigglesā¦ all with the need to go to 
ā¦ 
ā¦ just nice how you spinn that tension and it dissolves itself with a heartly ( and not mean) laughter- great shortstory 
awesome 
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Ha, ha, ha, ha
Thank you
That was what I was hoping for. 
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I want a tag too!! 
please!
Nice writing! 
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Please not me. Iām not a fan of tag lists since I get the notification for the post twice.
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Ups. Sorry! 
Next time for sure! 
Thank you! 
An after tag @lpfan61 
And while I am on it:
@StephLP18
@melisLP
@lplove
@framos1792
@annejprado
@Honey8
@IronSoldier16
@justinkilmer
@HakManLP
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Love that story 
thanks for the tag!
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Thx for the tag.
Stupid silly little girls, canāt stand them. Nice leaving the carrot there, lol!
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Truth, I love teenage girls.
They all happy giggling and talking. I just can watch and be happy for them.
Especially when my daughter is among them.
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Hiš¤i love your writing style,itās easy,comfortably and at the same time thrilling to read. Looking forward for more stories!(even though i am a teenage girlā¦ but not as mean as the ones in your story,i hope at leastš)
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Thanks for the tag!
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Thanks @zanybelle and @melisLP
@Linkineli to you too.
And I donāt think the girls were mean. Just didnāt know whatās going on.
And not everybody can say that she quiet down a whole buslode.
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Okš
Yes,thatās kind of epic!
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What???
Very suggestive. After the noice from behind the toilet door.
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Poor girls lol
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What?
I hold myself on the branch and circled the pelvis to get relaxed and movement inside.
And yea, probably a little scared for the little one too.
But its 15 years now, whatās left is the fun of it.
Cheered me up reading that story! Love the I remember having some digestive discomfort at work and spending a long time in a loo (we only had one female and one male on that floor) and people did start to get annoyed when itās constantly engaged I decided to go out round the back stairs and all the way round the fire escape to avoid anyone knowing I was in there silly really as anyone can suffer from it and thatās what I get for eating a yogurt based soup for 3 days! haha
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Lol! What an amazingly awkward situation that must have been Thanks for tagging me and sharing the story
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