When The Stars Fall- NickGr

The Barracks
#1

Inspired by A Thousand Suns.
“… I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds”

  • Robert Oppenheimer

Genre: alternative

Verse I:
The fire of a thousand sins has lightened
We can’t stop, we missed the chance to predict nightmare
Now we want the time to stop running
But everything we had is colliding
It’s 10 minutes before the Judgement falls
Before we fall into the untold

Chorus 1:
I know I could’ve tried
But to myself I won’t lie
I’ll stay here and watch the stars fall
And all I feel now is cold

Verse II:
Don;t apologize - there’s no reason to
It’s not you who led us into this tomb
All of their chess plays now have no sense
As they face the Audit
They’ll have no chance

Chorus 2:
I know I could’ve tried
But to myself I won’t lie
I’ll stay here and watch the stars fall
And all I feel now is cold

So now I won’t run
I’ll wait till the black sun
Shines inside and outside of me
And then I’ll finally be free

[Keyboard/piano/giutar solo]

Chorus 2:
I know I could’ve tried
But to myself I won’t lie
I’ll stay here and watch the stars fall
And all I feel now is cold

So now I won’t run
I’ll wait till the black sun
Shines inside and outside of me
And then I’ll finally be free

I fear as the cloud forms
But it’s too late: I’m into the untold

The Band:
@acemasters
@the_termin8r
@rickvanmeijel
@gatsie
@jabinquaken
@theearlywalker
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@AJ_7

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#2

@yolo5494
@lpfan61
stupid 10 persons rule

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#3

You can remove me from the tag list. I check new topics regardless of whether I’m tagged or not.

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#4

This is amazing song i love how it sounds
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#5

But you’re still a part of the band actually

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#6

For a moment I thought it was referred to me… :joy: :see_no_evil: :joy:
Seriously… thanks for adding me and don’t delete Rob! Or I’ll start again like with ironsoldier and the avatar… remember? :see_no_evil: :joy:

Well written! I like especially this part:

It’s a positive message to people who see only the darkness…there will be e light after it…like it!! :smile: :hugs:

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#7

great job guys :slight_smile:

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#8

Hey @NickGr :hugs:
i loved the black sun!!! That’s really a nice song :blush: keep writing! You are
getting better. Have a great day friend! And happy weekend to all!! :partly_sunny::partly_sunny:

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#9

Alright, first of all: Robert Oppenheimer? Is it the title? Or a reference? This confused me. This song scheme is a lil diverse to your other songs :blush: This feels very lively - I hear this song as RAP again, nu metall style- melodic line is this part:

With a voice like ITE, awww very great work my bro :sunny: :blush: :confetti_ball:

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#10

I like it
I like it alot

Its a simple but complex song all rolled into 1

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#11

@Honey8, @theearlywalker, @acemasters, @hilaryfol
You guys are a little too kind, just like always. Thanks a lot, really
Oh and @lpfan61 - it’s more of a reference to be free from life: a freedom in death

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#12

You are welcomed friend, :hugs::hugs: you are equally kind and good hearted :wink:
Have a good day!

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#13

:thinking: Young and such intense thoughts… I like it even more… :smile: :hugs:

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#14

beautiful! absolutely well done!

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#15

in Mother Russia… lol

thaanks !

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#16

You are so welcome i love your song they sound so good . I hope u have more coming.

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#17

Thanx. Probably I will write more or maybe publish something yet unknown :slight_smile: