The Unity Of Us - Drowning In Silence

@Honey8 you may have to take your turn as originally planned?!?

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ok i will… Where did @yolo5494 go?
Well i am doing economics motes currently, is it ok if i do it later today? please please … @acemasters

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Okay you guys have waited a lot i will do it now
Sorry @yolo5494 i really wanted to give you my chance :frowning:

Verse 1:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

Bridge:
NO! can’t stop this now
NO! suffocated all around

@NoireXJasper you next!

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We could of waited for you to do it later today :blush:

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but i wouldn’t have liked to make ya’ll wait more :blush:

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Verse 1:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

Bridge:
NO! can’t stop this now
NO! suffocated all around
All these pain, got pushed me down

@the_termin8r

Verse 1:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

Bridge:
NO! can’t stop this now
NO! suffocated all around
All these pain, got pushed me down
Sinking into the ground
Feels like I’m gonna drown

@NickGr

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Verse 1:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

Bridge:
NO! can’t stop this now
NO! suffocated all around
All these pain, got pushed me down
Sinking into the ground
Feels like I’m gonna drown

Chorus:

I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay
I’m fading in this silence away
Barely surviving to the new day

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It’s finished
@acemasters
@jabinquaken
@AJ_7
@the_termin8r
@yolo5494
@Honey8
@NoireXJasper
@gatsie
@rickvanmeijel

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Finally

@yolo5494 would you like to be included on the next song

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This one almost took a month.

Yeah we need something in place to speed things along, like give each person 24-48hrs to respond, even if it’s to say ā€œi’ll do it on x day!ā€

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Yep we can. That will be better.

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Oh, song’s kinda nice :stuck_out_tongue:

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yep! nice one though it took time :smile:

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