The Unity Of Us - Drowning In Silence

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting

@Honey8

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I will be completing it in some time today itself…

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears

@yolo5494

(sorry i couldn’t think of any other lines :slight_smile: )

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@yolo5494 your turn

Seems we’re back to the usual pace, the first song of this album was done unusually fast, now we’re compensating :stuck_out_tongue:

Yep first song was done really fast. I guess this have taken 2 weeks

Sorry @yolo5494 i don’t think we can wait any long so I am taking your go
Hope that’s alright with everyone else

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears

@the_termin8r your 2 line please

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Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears

Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears

@NickGr your turn (You can move my lines back into the verse, I just left a space to show which are mine).

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
@gatsie

And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

@NickGr

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
@rickvanmeijel

Wishing for something better every day

@yolo5494

Sorry for the late reply

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement
Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside
Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill
Verse 2
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!
Chorus:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay

@AJ_7

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Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse II:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
@AJ_7

(Tidying it up a little)

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Thank You @NickGr

I think people starting to relize i hate it messy lmao

2 Likes

Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse II:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

@acemasters

Will do mine later!!!

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Verse I:
Shhh, do you hear that? Total silence
How about we fix that with a dose of violence
Strike me peacefully, hit me quitely
Knowing that it all ends so violently
Now I suppose, how does this thing works?
Tryin’ not to hear them, from the madness of their voices
Cause you leave me no other choice
Everything I hoped to save, destroyed
Left in the darkness
Feels like solitary confinement

Pre-chorus:
So now I stand up and open my eyes
Rising up with the fires inside

Chorus 1:
Feeling out of balance
I am drowning in silence
Sigh, sigh - nothing still
Cry, cry - silent shrill
I hear the screams
Even in my dreams
Shout, shout - makes me ill
Out, out - they can kill

Verse II:
Peering into darkness, I’m at the edge of listening
Vacuum is inside of me, what’s constantly resisting
Resisting and pulling me deeper in my fears
And those criticizing people just grind my gears
I am scream out for help, but falls on deaf ears
So i’m drowning in silence as my voice disappears
Why must I succumb to all of these fears?
Every time I try to fight it ends in tears
My voice faints in the darkness of the world
I’m falling into the untold
And it is oh so quiet SHH SHH* it is oh so still SHH SHH*
This suffocating silence SHH SHH* MAKES ME MENTALLY ILL!

Chorus 2:
I can’t hold on
I close my eyes
Wishing for something better every day
Waiting to stand up in my dismay
Hoping this feeling will not stay

Bridge
NO! can’t stop this now

@yolo5494 @honey8 said you could have their line so it’s your go again :blush::blush::yum::yum:

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@yolo5494

I’ve told @yolo5494 but they haven’t replied…