The Ace Masters 365 Lyric Challenge

Day 42: Tribute

They told me chin up, hold you head up high
I respond with a question, “tell me why?”
Tell me how life is so great,
This wasn’t supposed to be part of my fate
I didn’t ever think that I would have to start again
But here we are talking about it
Don’t ask me how am I feeling about it
Because I don’t know where the road leads
The pain of the wounds inside still bleeds
Like it was yesterday that it all happened
I miss him, knowing I won’t get to hear his voice
Apart from listening to old stuff that people said was just noise
It was so much more to me
It spoke to me, knew how I felt
So tell me now, how to get out of this hell
Because I don’t know

I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories

I started to listen to some of the tracks and I was alright
But then one song comes on and the tears I try to fight
But the emotions is too great, it takes over
I’m crying, I can’t stop it, I wished it would just passover
People ask me why am i crying
About someone I didn’t actually know dying
But they don’t get it, the connection he made
All the live shows I went to that he played
Was like, “wow man, this is so awesome”
When I saw him play live for the first time years ago in autumn
I never got the chance to meet him just to say thank you
You helped me understand the pain that I went through
He always said that they had the best fans
And I say to my friends that he was in the best bands
His legacy will always live inside of all of us
Because in some way he touched all our hearts

I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories

(Instrumental)

I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Hey @acemasters I am sorry to be lost… but yes… my feedback and votes coming soon. Keep smiling friend!
I also wanted to say that i liked your contribution of the Nick’s video :blush: It was very nice :slight_smile:

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COME AND GET ME!!! - its reminds me of wastelands! “Roll credits you get it the show’s done. You’re talking for just talking and meaning you’ve got none!” :grinning:

Let It All Go - it was really nicely expressed. :blush::blush:

Backstabbing exposure - yes!! It was soo powerful lyrics!! I can feel it. Loved the raps in the starting lines! :grinning: :muscle:

From the other side - “what is the smile really means!” :grinning: I liked it. Like sometimes things aren’t the way the seem to be… the are entirely different from it. :slightly_smiling_face:

Multi- media - true about today’s world. You made it in a nice question form :slightly_smiling_face::+1:

A fine line - was a very fine work! :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes: Great one!

The evil other half - i like the starting verses. They are so nice! Like perfect… like they are meant to be for this song! :grinning::grinning:

Wake me verse was so great !!! I am going to vote for that first!! Just perfect! :smiley::smiley:

Here to stay - powerful lyrics!! Some of
your rhymes are sooo energetic like the person may be sleeping but wakes up reading them! :laughing: :smiley::muscle: :star_struck:

Yep it seriously was… i loved them!

Coming out stronger made me stronger. I was really thinking about some stuffs. Like they have been bothering recently. Thanks for the strength :slightly_smiling_face::sparkles:

(Okay something cool now…review for *dear diary)
Dear diary I’d like to tell ya something
About an experience or just a small writing
Felt so nice while i was reading
I feel it right now while creating
This verse, which came out of my heart
To appreciate the ideas of someone smart
Someone who knows this feelings
About the world and their sufferings !

( Hope you like that acemaster!!! :blush::blush::blush:)

What’s the full form?? And how is this so similar?? 5FDP ? :confused:

Gratefullness aww so grateful to read gratefullness…lol. it’s nice and sweet :blush::blush:

Tribute - the first line was enough to take away my heart! Chin up audocious!

  • Apologies for being so late for the reviews
  • thanks for tagging , i read them everyday through emails :slightly_smiling_face:
  • parents won’t allow me in here anymore till around a month. Cause my exams are coming. Apologies in advance cause I can’t be here even if i want.
  • you are really awesome and dedicated to the challenge which inspires mee too to keep moving on my goals.
  • you write amazing :sparkles::sparkles: :heart:
    Thanks.
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Day 43: My Many Dreams

I remember when I was a little younger
I knew back then what I wanted to be
I had a different ambition in my mind
It’s what I wanted out of me

I wanted to fly planes, become a pilot
It was the first dream job I had
But then I failed to pursue that dream
I couldn’t have any of that

Then I wanted to work as a comic book writer
I know that dream was farfetched
Because many wanted me to draw too
But I couldn’t even sketch

So I moved on from that and saw a new dream
I wanted to teach the younger generation
Once again that dream fell flat
I didn’t have any qualifications

Dream after dream I saw explode
I didn’t know what else to do
But then I discovered Linkin Park
And then I relized what I wanted to do

I wrote my first song, was it a fluke
I wrote another and thats when I knew
That I had a little talent inside of my brain
And I write songs over and over again

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Day 44: When Will The Madness End?

Sometimes the darkest days comes when I least expect it
And sometimes it too much to bare
When the light is too far to find and out of reach
And I lose the will to care

(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
How can I escape?
(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
I need to figure out

How…
To shake this feeling of sorrow
To make it to tomorrow
To find a way out of all of this
Now…
I need to let go of this sorrow
For a chance to see tomorrow
And find a way out of all this

Sometimes the hurt inside overwhelms me
The pain is far too much to take
Healing seems like a myth that don’t exsist
That I am starting break

(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
How can I escape?
(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
I need to figure out

How…
To shake this feeling of sorrow
To make it to tomorrow
To find a way out of all of this
Now…
I need to let go of this sorrow
For a chance to see tomorrow
And find a way out of all this

How much long must I endure this?
When will I know that it’s over?
Why am I going through all of this?
What must I do to make it go away?

(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
How can I escape?
(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
I need to figure out

How…
To shake this feeling of sorrow
To make it to tomorrow
To find a way out of all of this
Now…
I need to let go of this sorrow
For a chance to see tomorrow
And find a way out of all this

(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
How can I escape?
(Ohing)
When will this madness end?
(Ohing)
I need to figure out

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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The madness never ends (kidding :slight_smile: ). Nice lyrics once again! Keep up the challenge, you’re doing great

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Day 45: The Unity of Us

We are a little team of lyricist
Putting together some songs
We pitch our ideas and take our turns
We are The Unity of Us

We are a close unit
Bound together with trust and honesty
We have each others backs
We’re also part of the LPU Family

We inspire each other
Strife for better lyrics
Push passed the bounderies

We’re not some super group
We are much more then that
We are more like a mish-mash of family
That come together and attack

We know who we are and what we do
We are not professional, yet we choose
To serve out some lyrics, hope to inspire
Ignite the fire in everyones burning desire

We are The Unity of Us
We don’t kick up a fuss
We just like getting together

(Instrumental)

We are The Unity of Us
We don’t kick up a fuss
We just like getting together
We inspire each other
Strife for better lyrics
Push passed the bounderies

We are The Unity of Us…

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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While reading this I imagined a video with us dressed up as gangsters and rapping over the top

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Absolutely amazing @acemasters … you make me dance :dancer:t2: rn- singing „we are a close unit- yeah…, lalala bound together with trust and hooonesty hey- and we have each others back ohh yeahhhh - :heart_eyes: absolutely A M A Z I N G - I feel it, powerful as heck- a real masterpiece again -

And I am in the middle of my voting process… it’s really heavy- there are left 20 song that I love and only 14 votes allowed :sweat_smile:

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Just voted for my favorites @acemasters
I was dissapointed to see Too Big For Your Boots scoring so low. I think those type of lyrics are really fun! Then again When I’m Rocking This Place is scoring pretty good, which might be my number 1 song :grinning:

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Day 46: Just For Me

I am consistantly reminded
About the mistakes in my past
I look at old pictures
Even though I know I shouldn’t
I am always searching
For some serenity in my life
I hope there is a better future
That I want to see for myself

Because I…
Like to think that there’s something better for me
That there is something out there that’s just for me
Just out of reach
I…
Know that I can get it if I just tried a little harder
Because there is something out that’s just for me
Within my grasp

I am constantly reminded
Of everything that I’ve done
I read old messages
That I know I shouldn’t do
I need to learn to move on
And look for a clearer path
There has to be a better future
That is out there just for me

Because I…
Like to think that there’s something better for me
That there is something out there that’s just for me
Just out of reach
I…
Know that I can get it if I just tried a little harder
Because there is something out that’s just for me
Within my grasp

Just for me…
Just for me…
Just for me…
Just for me…

Because I…
Like to think that there’s something better for me
That there is something out there that’s just for me
Just out of reach
I…
Know that I can get it if I just tried a little harder
Because there is something out there that’s just for me
Within my grasp

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Awwww- very hopefull lines, empowering and motivating :muscle:t2: to just go on, no matter what- great lyrics Ace :sunny: :heart_eyes:

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I love this one… much more mellow and reflective but hits the nail on the head :+1:

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Please note this is a very short song
1 verse no chorus this is the whole song
And yes, this counts :joy::joy::joy:

Day 47: The Strain

I said to myself lets start a new challenge
To try and upset the balance
Write a new piece each and everyday
“Wow” was the phase that most people say
That I must be crazy, completely mad
I said not all songs will be good, some will be bad
But everyone had my back, showed me support
In the back of my head though I am thinking abort
That maybe this challenge is just to much for me
That I over thinked it mentally
Forty-Seven days in and I starting to think I need to quit
Maybe that I ain’t made for any of it
But I know that people are willing me on
To produce daily, an awesome song
So I try my best to make my fans proud
So they want to keep me around
Peace

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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I see day 47 didn’t do so well :joy::joy::joy::joy:
Not much love for The Strain
So here is a love-ish song for you lot :grin::grin:

Day 48: I Do

The day has finally come, to see you walk up to me
In a white dress, smiling with joy
Your eyes say you love me, your lips say I do
I tell you that my heart belongs to you

I vowed to honor you, in sickness and in health
For richer or poorer, for better or worse
No matter what life throws our way
We can make it through everyday

From the minute I gave you the engagment ring
I knew I want nothing else but to spend my life with you
When the wedding march starts playing
I know that I will be saying, I do!

It took a long time to get to this
I am ready for the wedding bliss
There’s nothing I would rather do
Then to spend my life loving you

I can’t wait to introduce you as my wife
I hope you feel the same way to
I guess you must, because here you are
Ready to say to me “I do”

From the minute I gave you the engagment ring
I knew I want nothing else but to spend my life with you
When the wedding march starts playing
I know that I will be saying, I do!

(Softly sung)
I do…
I do…
I do…
I do…

(I do…)
From the minute I gave you the engagment ring
(I do…)
I knew I want nothing else but to spend my life with you
(I do…)
When the wedding march starts playing
(I do…)
I know that I will be saying, I do!

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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:heart_eyes: how romantic you can be… very nice new part from you Ace! Did she read these lyrics already? They‘ll make her dance! I swear!! Great lovesong :heart:

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No, any song I write for her doesn’t see the light of day, they are hers and hers alone

Oh geez I do I DOOOO ace! :sob::sob:

:hushed::face_with_raised_eyebrow::zipper_mouth_face: AHEMMM let me get my composure back…that was uhh ehhh…that was truly touching :relaxed: somehow I didn’t think you’d write a more romantic song but it’s very well done :+1:

^not teasing up there, just expressing how it brought the squeal out even in this sappy dude here :grin:

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Wow that’s so sweet great love song :grin:

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Day 49: Beware!

I am coming at ya, let’s get started
This is not a rhyme for the faint hearted
There is gonna be a lot of curse words
Hmmm which one should I use first?
Maybe motherfucker, stupid fucking cunt
Or how you’re an arsehole, how you had some front
Trying to step your shit up to me, trying to disarm me mentally
When you realize eventually, that there is no stopping me
I am like a freight train, get that through your fucking brain
Like that voice inside your head, driving you insane
You sit and you ponder, and start to really wonder
If it would be easier to get struck by thunder
But you know what, I don’t really give fuck
I am now aiming for you, and oh look now, you’re a sitting duck

Beware…
Beware…
Beware there’s danger, if you come for this stranger
Beware…
Beware…
Beware, high voltage, come too close and you’ll get joltage
Beware, beware, beware…

Oh you thought I was kidding, thought I was playing
That it was a joke that I was saying
You can’t be that fucking stupid, oh wait, maybe you are
Because right now you’re acting really dumb
Saying that you could take me on, that you could get me gone
You mention it in a song, I respond that you was wrong
Here I still stand, and this song is for you
You’re looking around like “shit man, what else can I do”
There isn’t fuck all that you can do, I am staying around
And now it’s my turn now to take you down

Beware…
Beware…
Beware there’s danger, if you come for this stranger
Beware…
Beware…
Beware, high voltage, come too close and you’ll get joltage
Beware, beware, beware…

You better beware, better be careful there
Watch where you step, because I’m everywhere
You better beware, better be careful there
Watch where you step, because I’m everywhere

Beware…
Beware…
Beware there’s danger, if you come for this stranger
Beware…
Beware…
Beware, high voltage, come too close and you’ll get joltage
Beware, beware, beware…

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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