The Ace Masters 365 Lyric Challenge

Powerful!! :muscle: :muscle: :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes:

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Beautifully written! Easily one of my favourites!

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Now this is a Smash Into Pieces song… awesome!

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Day 36: Dear Diary

Dear diary,
Today was the first day at school
All the kids in my class was so crule
Because to them I didn’t look cool
I
Don’t want to go back there
Even my teachers do not care
It’s just far too much for me to bare

Dear diary,
Today wasn’t any better for me
They made my day a total misery
No-one would just let me be
I
Tried to eat my lunch on my own
Even then they won’t leave me alone
What am I supposed to do, I don’t know

Dear Diary,
At school, it’s a brand new week
Maybe things aren’t so bleak
Because I refuse to be beat
I
Guess things can only get better
If it don’t now it won’t ever
Will I give up? No, never!

Dear diary
This is my last entry about this school
I was kidding myself, I was a fool
They pushed me today in the swimming pool
I
Have really had enough of this
My class mates always seem to take the piss
My old school I am starting to miss

Dear diary
My last entry wasn’t really my last
Because it was only about the past
And things can really change fast
I
Slowly coming to terms with things
Getting used to what each day brings
And when I come out stronger, guess what? I win!

The Band

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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I loved this song… And I don’t have word to express how I’m feeling now… Just excellent! Goodnight/morning. (2:40 here)

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This next song was inspired by Halfway Right, but flows completely differently
And this is the first song released on the stroke of midnight (my time)

Day 37: The Results of My Drink (Working Title)

I didn’t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didn’t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong

I woke up this morning in somebody elses house
I don’t really remember how I got here
All I know is that I was completely wasted
After I drunk more then just a couple of beers

People warned me to know my limits
But I didn’t want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes

I didn’t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didn’t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didn’t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didn’t know why I lashed out
I know now what I’m apologising about

I woke up this morning and my head is thumping
It’s the result of what happened last night
I don’t remember how it got to this point
All I remember is that it all end up in a fight

People warned me to know my limits
But I didn’t want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes

I didn’t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didn’t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didn’t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didn’t know why I lashed out
I know now what I’m apologising about

(Instrumental)

I didn’t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didn’t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong

(Instrumental)

I didn’t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didn’t know why I lashed out
I know now what I’m apologising about

The Band

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Preview of a song in progress:

They told me chin up, hold you head up high
I respond with a question, ā€œtell me why?ā€
Tell me how life is so great,
This wasn’t supposed to be part of my fate
I didn’t ever think that I would have to start again
But here we are talking about it
Don’t ask me how am I feeling about it
Because I don’t know where the road leads
The pain of the wounds inside still bleeds
Like it was yesterday that it all happened
I miss him, knowing I won’t get to hear his voice
Apart from listening to old stuff that people said was just noise
It was so much more to me
It spoke to me, knew how I felt
So tell me now, how to get out of this hell
Because I don’t know

I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Hey acemasters, you can stop tagging me since I regularly check this thread anyway :slight_smile:

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What a flow man! Awesome- powerful - touching- you get still better and better although it’s almost impossible- this challenge is just lifting you up to higher grounds- like a real master of words :heart_eyes:

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@rickvanmeijel i just copy paste the tag list from The Unity of Us but yeh ok can do :slight_smile:
@lpfan61 would you like to take the spot on the tag list?

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Wow!thank you so much for the offer!!yes, pleeaseee! :blush: :hugs: :sun_with_face:

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Please note that the following lyrics contains language that some viewers may find offensive, parental advisory is adviced
Proceed with caution

This is a personal one for me when my so called Uncle stole my childrens birthday present from my Nans house after she passed away
It’s been a working progress to put what I wanted to do or how I felt as the 1st verse was completed 3 years ago, the rest of the song completed during this challenge

Day 38: I’m After You

You better start running i’m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you i’m gonna tare you apart
You can mess with me, that’s alright
When you mess with my family you better be willing to fight
No i cannot forgive you, no i cannot forget it
When i catch you, beat you [spoiler]shitless[/spoiler], I will not regret it
I’m just very protective not violent at all
You fucked with the wrong family, now your face is gonna meet the wall

I…
Am after you…
You better run…
You better hope I don’t catch up to you
I’m after you…
You better hide…
Because I’m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are flying at you intensely
You took shit that wasn’t yours to take
When I catch you, all you limbs I will break
I thought I could forget what you had done
I thought that it would effect as much, that was wrong
I’m not a violent person, but I will beat you black and blue
You’d wished you never did it when I am fininshed with you

I…
Am after you…
You better run…
You better hope I don’t catch up to you
I’m after you…
You better hide…
Because I’m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

You better start running i’m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you i’m gonna tare you apart
You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are going to be flying at you intensely

I…
Am after you…
You better run…
You better hope I don’t catch up to you
I’m after you…
You better hide…
Because I’m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Aggressive! Better not being against you… :laughing: jokes aside I like this one very much! :smile:

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You are awesome. A few last lyrics of you sound like they’ve been taken from 5FPD’s ā€œWar is the answerā€ — this one surely does too

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I actually haven’t heard any 5FDP songs :joy::joy::joy::joy: ive heard of the band but yeh never listened to them

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Day 39: She Is The One

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

No matter how bad I get
Regardless of everything I say
She is the one to stick by my side
When I am feeling sad
Even when I am feeling mad
She is the one to hold me when I cry

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

No matter what is going on
Even when I say nothing’s wrong
She is the one to tell me it’ll be alright
For all the times I couldn’t find my way
Whenever I didn’t feel okay
She is the one to help win the fight

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

She is the fire in my heart
She is my addictive drug
She is the only one I need
She is my everything

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
And she knows that I love her too

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Just catched up right now and experienced again how close hate and love can be -

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Day 40: Greatfullness

My life isn’t perfect
My wife drives me round the bend
My kids make me pull out my hair
But I wouldn’t have it any other way

My house isn’t big
My kitchen can barely fit one person in
My bedroom has no room to move
But it is still home

I am lucky
To have what I have
I can’t complain

My job isn’t the best
The pay sometimes is questionable
It feels like forever to get my money
But at least it pays the bills

My cooking isn’t fabulous
My food doesn’t always look like we can eat it
We sit around a small table
But at least we have food to eat

I am lucky
To have what I have
I can’t complain
About my life

Some people have nothing
Or struggle worse then we do
I know it sounds selfish
But I count myself lucky

I am lucky
To have what I have
I can’t complain
About my life
I have everything
That i’ll ever need
I don’t complain
About my life

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Awwww…it’s really beautiful! :heart_eyes: :sun_with_face:

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Day 41: Invisible

You treated me, like you couldn’t see me
You sometimes pretended like I didn’t exsist
Walked passed me like I wasn’t there
I felt invisible and no-one cared

But now you can see me
Because I’m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I don’t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didn’t think that level of ignorance was visable
It’s not like I had anyone around
It’s funny because you can see me now

You walk pass me crying on the ground
Walking away like you cannot see me
Turning a blind eye, because you felt you was better
But now things have changed

Now you can see me
Because I’m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I don’t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didn’t think that level of ignorance was visable
It’s not like I had anyone around
It’s funny because you can see me now

You treated me like I was nothing
You made feel invisible
But now I am something
You want to know me, so typical

But now you can see me
Because I’m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I don’t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didn’t think that level of ignorance was visable
It’s not like I had anyone around
It’s funny because you can see me now

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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