Powerful!!
Beautifully written! Easily one of my favourites!
Now this is a Smash Into Pieces songā¦ awesome!
Day 36: Dear Diary
Dear diary,
Today was the first day at school
All the kids in my class was so crule
Because to them I didnāt look cool
I
Donāt want to go back there
Even my teachers do not care
Itās just far too much for me to bare
Dear diary,
Today wasnāt any better for me
They made my day a total misery
No-one would just let me be
I
Tried to eat my lunch on my own
Even then they wonāt leave me alone
What am I supposed to do, I donāt know
Dear Diary,
At school, itās a brand new week
Maybe things arenāt so bleak
Because I refuse to be beat
I
Guess things can only get better
If it donāt now it wonāt ever
Will I give up? No, never!
Dear diary
This is my last entry about this school
I was kidding myself, I was a fool
They pushed me today in the swimming pool
I
Have really had enough of this
My class mates always seem to take the piss
My old school I am starting to miss
Dear diary
My last entry wasnāt really my last
Because it was only about the past
And things can really change fast
I
Slowly coming to terms with things
Getting used to what each day brings
And when I come out stronger, guess what? I win!
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
I loved this songā¦ And I donāt have word to express how Iām feeling nowā¦ Just excellent! Goodnight/morning. (2:40 here)
This next song was inspired by Halfway Right, but flows completely differently
And this is the first song released on the stroke of midnight (my time)
Day 37: The Results of My Drink (Working Title)
I didnāt know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnāt know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I woke up this morning in somebody elses house
I donāt really remember how I got here
All I know is that I was completely wasted
After I drunk more then just a couple of beers
People warned me to know my limits
But I didnāt want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes
I didnāt know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnāt know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didnāt know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnāt know why I lashed out
I know now what Iām apologising about
I woke up this morning and my head is thumping
Itās the result of what happened last night
I donāt remember how it got to this point
All I remember is that it all end up in a fight
People warned me to know my limits
But I didnāt want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes
I didnāt know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnāt know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didnāt know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnāt know why I lashed out
I know now what Iām apologising about
(Instrumental)
I didnāt know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnāt know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
(Instrumental)
I didnāt know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnāt know why I lashed out
I know now what Iām apologising about
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Preview of a song in progress:
They told me chin up, hold you head up high
I respond with a question, ātell me why?ā
Tell me how life is so great,
This wasnāt supposed to be part of my fate
I didnāt ever think that I would have to start again
But here we are talking about it
Donāt ask me how am I feeling about it
Because I donāt know where the road leads
The pain of the wounds inside still bleeds
Like it was yesterday that it all happened
I miss him, knowing I wonāt get to hear his voice
Apart from listening to old stuff that people said was just noise
It was so much more to me
It spoke to me, knew how I felt
So tell me now, how to get out of this hell
Because I donāt know
I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
The Tag List
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Hey acemasters, you can stop tagging me since I regularly check this thread anyway
What a flow man! Awesome- powerful - touching- you get still better and better although itās almost impossible- this challenge is just lifting you up to higher grounds- like a real master of words
@rickvanmeijel i just copy paste the tag list from The Unity of Us but yeh ok can do
@lpfan61 would you like to take the spot on the tag list?
Wow!thank you so much for the offer!!yes, pleeaseee!
Please note that the following lyrics contains language that some viewers may find offensive, parental advisory is adviced
Proceed with caution
This is a personal one for me when my so called Uncle stole my childrens birthday present from my Nans house after she passed away
Itās been a working progress to put what I wanted to do or how I felt as the 1st verse was completed 3 years ago, the rest of the song completed during this challenge
Day 38: Iām After You
You better start running iām gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you iām gonna tare you apart
You can mess with me, thatās alright
When you mess with my family you better be willing to fight
No i cannot forgive you, no i cannot forget it
When i catch you, beat you [spoiler]shitless[/spoiler], I will not regret it
Iām just very protective not violent at all
You fucked with the wrong family, now your face is gonna meet the wall
Iā¦
Am after youā¦
You better runā¦
You better hope I donāt catch up to you
Iām after youā¦
You better hideā¦
Because Iām gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!
You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are flying at you intensely
You took shit that wasnāt yours to take
When I catch you, all you limbs I will break
I thought I could forget what you had done
I thought that it would effect as much, that was wrong
Iām not a violent person, but I will beat you black and blue
Youād wished you never did it when I am fininshed with you
Iā¦
Am after youā¦
You better runā¦
You better hope I donāt catch up to you
Iām after youā¦
You better hideā¦
Because Iām gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!
You better start running iām gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you iām gonna tare you apart
You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are going to be flying at you intensely
Iā¦
Am after youā¦
You better runā¦
You better hope I donāt catch up to you
Iām after youā¦
You better hideā¦
Because Iām gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!
The Tag List
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Aggressive! Better not being against youā¦ jokes aside I like this one very much!
You are awesome. A few last lyrics of you sound like theyāve been taken from 5FPDās āWar is the answerā ā this one surely does too
I actually havenāt heard any 5FDP songs ive heard of the band but yeh never listened to them
Day 39: She Is The One
She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
No matter how bad I get
Regardless of everything I say
She is the one to stick by my side
When I am feeling sad
Even when I am feeling mad
She is the one to hold me when I cry
She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
No matter what is going on
Even when I say nothingās wrong
She is the one to tell me itāll be alright
For all the times I couldnāt find my way
Whenever I didnāt feel okay
She is the one to help win the fight
She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
She is the fire in my heart
She is my addictive drug
She is the only one I need
She is my everything
She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
And she knows that I love her too
The Tag List
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Just catched up right now and experienced again how close hate and love can be -
Day 40: Greatfullness
My life isnāt perfect
My wife drives me round the bend
My kids make me pull out my hair
But I wouldnāt have it any other way
My house isnāt big
My kitchen can barely fit one person in
My bedroom has no room to move
But it is still home
I am lucky
To have what I have
I canāt complain
My job isnāt the best
The pay sometimes is questionable
It feels like forever to get my money
But at least it pays the bills
My cooking isnāt fabulous
My food doesnāt always look like we can eat it
We sit around a small table
But at least we have food to eat
I am lucky
To have what I have
I canāt complain
About my life
Some people have nothing
Or struggle worse then we do
I know it sounds selfish
But I count myself lucky
I am lucky
To have what I have
I canāt complain
About my life
I have everything
That iāll ever need
I donāt complain
About my life
The Tag List
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Awwwwā¦itās really beautiful!
Day 41: Invisible
You treated me, like you couldnāt see me
You sometimes pretended like I didnāt exsist
Walked passed me like I wasnāt there
I felt invisible and no-one cared
But now you can see me
Because Iām someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donāt want to listen
Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnāt think that level of ignorance was visable
Itās not like I had anyone around
Itās funny because you can see me now
You walk pass me crying on the ground
Walking away like you cannot see me
Turning a blind eye, because you felt you was better
But now things have changed
Now you can see me
Because Iām someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donāt want to listen
Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnāt think that level of ignorance was visable
Itās not like I had anyone around
Itās funny because you can see me now
You treated me like I was nothing
You made feel invisible
But now I am something
You want to know me, so typical
But now you can see me
Because Iām someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donāt want to listen
Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnāt think that level of ignorance was visable
Itās not like I had anyone around
Itās funny because you can see me now
The Tag List
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker