The Ace Masters 365 Lyric Challenge

Powerful!! :muscle: :muscle: :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes:

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Beautifully written! Easily one of my favourites!

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Now this is a Smash Into Pieces songā€¦ awesome!

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Day 36: Dear Diary

Dear diary,
Today was the first day at school
All the kids in my class was so crule
Because to them I didnā€™t look cool
I
Donā€™t want to go back there
Even my teachers do not care
Itā€™s just far too much for me to bare

Dear diary,
Today wasnā€™t any better for me
They made my day a total misery
No-one would just let me be
I
Tried to eat my lunch on my own
Even then they wonā€™t leave me alone
What am I supposed to do, I donā€™t know

Dear Diary,
At school, itā€™s a brand new week
Maybe things arenā€™t so bleak
Because I refuse to be beat
I
Guess things can only get better
If it donā€™t now it wonā€™t ever
Will I give up? No, never!

Dear diary
This is my last entry about this school
I was kidding myself, I was a fool
They pushed me today in the swimming pool
I
Have really had enough of this
My class mates always seem to take the piss
My old school I am starting to miss

Dear diary
My last entry wasnā€™t really my last
Because it was only about the past
And things can really change fast
I
Slowly coming to terms with things
Getting used to what each day brings
And when I come out stronger, guess what? I win!

The Band

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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I loved this songā€¦ And I donā€™t have word to express how Iā€™m feeling nowā€¦ Just excellent! Goodnight/morning. (2:40 here)

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This next song was inspired by Halfway Right, but flows completely differently
And this is the first song released on the stroke of midnight (my time)

Day 37: The Results of My Drink (Working Title)

I didnā€™t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnā€™t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong

I woke up this morning in somebody elses house
I donā€™t really remember how I got here
All I know is that I was completely wasted
After I drunk more then just a couple of beers

People warned me to know my limits
But I didnā€™t want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes

I didnā€™t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnā€™t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didnā€™t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnā€™t know why I lashed out
I know now what Iā€™m apologising about

I woke up this morning and my head is thumping
Itā€™s the result of what happened last night
I donā€™t remember how it got to this point
All I remember is that it all end up in a fight

People warned me to know my limits
But I didnā€™t want to listen
I would lash out to my mates
I look back now and know my mistakes

I didnā€™t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnā€™t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong
I didnā€™t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnā€™t know why I lashed out
I know now what Iā€™m apologising about

(Instrumental)

I didnā€™t know what I was doing
I know now I was stupid
I didnā€™t know what was going on
I know now that I was wrong

(Instrumental)

I didnā€™t know my limits
I know it now and I admit it
I didnā€™t know why I lashed out
I know now what Iā€™m apologising about

The Band

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Preview of a song in progress:

They told me chin up, hold you head up high
I respond with a question, ā€œtell me why?ā€
Tell me how life is so great,
This wasnā€™t supposed to be part of my fate
I didnā€™t ever think that I would have to start again
But here we are talking about it
Donā€™t ask me how am I feeling about it
Because I donā€™t know where the road leads
The pain of the wounds inside still bleeds
Like it was yesterday that it all happened
I miss him, knowing I wonā€™t get to hear his voice
Apart from listening to old stuff that people said was just noise
It was so much more to me
It spoke to me, knew how I felt
So tell me now, how to get out of this hell
Because I donā€™t know

I thought I was okay
I thought I had dealt with it
It comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories
I try to remember the good things he did
How he helped me through my pain
But it comes flooding back
In waves of painful memories

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Hey acemasters, you can stop tagging me since I regularly check this thread anyway :slight_smile:

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What a flow man! Awesome- powerful - touching- you get still better and better although itā€™s almost impossible- this challenge is just lifting you up to higher grounds- like a real master of words :heart_eyes:

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@rickvanmeijel i just copy paste the tag list from The Unity of Us but yeh ok can do :slight_smile:
@lpfan61 would you like to take the spot on the tag list?

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Wow!thank you so much for the offer!!yes, pleeaseee! :blush: :hugs: :sun_with_face:

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Please note that the following lyrics contains language that some viewers may find offensive, parental advisory is adviced
Proceed with caution

This is a personal one for me when my so called Uncle stole my childrens birthday present from my Nans house after she passed away
Itā€™s been a working progress to put what I wanted to do or how I felt as the 1st verse was completed 3 years ago, the rest of the song completed during this challenge

Day 38: Iā€™m After You

You better start running iā€™m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you iā€™m gonna tare you apart
You can mess with me, thatā€™s alright
When you mess with my family you better be willing to fight
No i cannot forgive you, no i cannot forget it
When i catch you, beat you [spoiler]shitless[/spoiler], I will not regret it
Iā€™m just very protective not violent at all
You fucked with the wrong family, now your face is gonna meet the wall

Iā€¦
Am after youā€¦
You better runā€¦
You better hope I donā€™t catch up to you
Iā€™m after youā€¦
You better hideā€¦
Because Iā€™m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are flying at you intensely
You took shit that wasnā€™t yours to take
When I catch you, all you limbs I will break
I thought I could forget what you had done
I thought that it would effect as much, that was wrong
Iā€™m not a violent person, but I will beat you black and blue
Youā€™d wished you never did it when I am fininshed with you

Iā€¦
Am after youā€¦
You better runā€¦
You better hope I donā€™t catch up to you
Iā€™m after youā€¦
You better hideā€¦
Because Iā€™m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

You better start running iā€™m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up
When i get to you iā€™m gonna tare you apart
You need to start panicing when you see me
Because fist are going to be flying at you intensely

Iā€¦
Am after youā€¦
You better runā€¦
You better hope I donā€™t catch up to you
Iā€™m after youā€¦
You better hideā€¦
Because Iā€™m gonna [spoiler]fuck[/spoiler] you up when I catch up to you!!!

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Aggressive! Better not being against youā€¦ :laughing: jokes aside I like this one very much! :smile:

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You are awesome. A few last lyrics of you sound like theyā€™ve been taken from 5FPDā€™s ā€œWar is the answerā€ ā€” this one surely does too

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I actually havenā€™t heard any 5FDP songs :joy::joy::joy::joy: ive heard of the band but yeh never listened to them

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Day 39: She Is The One

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

No matter how bad I get
Regardless of everything I say
She is the one to stick by my side
When I am feeling sad
Even when I am feeling mad
She is the one to hold me when I cry

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

No matter what is going on
Even when I say nothingā€™s wrong
She is the one to tell me itā€™ll be alright
For all the times I couldnā€™t find my way
Whenever I didnā€™t feel okay
She is the one to help win the fight

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through

She is the fire in my heart
She is my addictive drug
She is the only one I need
She is my everything

She is my star in the darkest skies
She is the reason that I can get by
She is the only one that I can turn to
She is the one that puts up what I go through
And she knows that I love her too

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Just catched up right now and experienced again how close hate and love can be -

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Day 40: Greatfullness

My life isnā€™t perfect
My wife drives me round the bend
My kids make me pull out my hair
But I wouldnā€™t have it any other way

My house isnā€™t big
My kitchen can barely fit one person in
My bedroom has no room to move
But it is still home

I am lucky
To have what I have
I canā€™t complain

My job isnā€™t the best
The pay sometimes is questionable
It feels like forever to get my money
But at least it pays the bills

My cooking isnā€™t fabulous
My food doesnā€™t always look like we can eat it
We sit around a small table
But at least we have food to eat

I am lucky
To have what I have
I canā€™t complain
About my life

Some people have nothing
Or struggle worse then we do
I know it sounds selfish
But I count myself lucky

I am lucky
To have what I have
I canā€™t complain
About my life
I have everything
That iā€™ll ever need
I donā€™t complain
About my life

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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Awwwwā€¦itā€™s really beautiful! :heart_eyes: :sun_with_face:

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Day 41: Invisible

You treated me, like you couldnā€™t see me
You sometimes pretended like I didnā€™t exsist
Walked passed me like I wasnā€™t there
I felt invisible and no-one cared

But now you can see me
Because Iā€™m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donā€™t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnā€™t think that level of ignorance was visable
Itā€™s not like I had anyone around
Itā€™s funny because you can see me now

You walk pass me crying on the ground
Walking away like you cannot see me
Turning a blind eye, because you felt you was better
But now things have changed

Now you can see me
Because Iā€™m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donā€™t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnā€™t think that level of ignorance was visable
Itā€™s not like I had anyone around
Itā€™s funny because you can see me now

You treated me like I was nothing
You made feel invisible
But now I am something
You want to know me, so typical

But now you can see me
Because Iā€™m someone important
You tried to reach out to me
But I donā€™t want to listen

Because
You treated me like I was invisible
I didnā€™t think that level of ignorance was visable
Itā€™s not like I had anyone around
Itā€™s funny because you can see me now

The Tag List

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@lpfan61
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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