Still waiting by stephanie T

You don’t know what I’ve been through
You don’t know what I seen
Cause you want everything to be the same
It’s time to appect what’s going on
And try and stop it someway somehow

Cause you don’t know what I been through
And you don’t know what I seen
It’s seems like every day
Another soul is taken away
It’s time to step away from the sorrow
And start to think about tomorrow
It’s seems this day has lasted for years
With nothing but endless tears

People say I need to move on
But how
You need strength to move on
Which was taken from me long ago
So I lay here waiting for same sign
That every thing will be fine

Cause you don’t know what I been through
And you don’t know what I seen
It seems like every day
Another soul has gone away
It’s time to stop the sorrow
And start to think about tomorrow
It seems this day has lasted for years
With nothing but endless tears

It’s time to get what is yours back
Instead of laying on the track
Just strip away my pride
And wash ever mistake aside

Cause you don’t know what I been through
And you don’t know what I seen
Another day
Another soul is taken away
And I can’t stop the sorrow
And its to late to think about tomorrow
This day has lasted for years
With nothing but endless tears

And I am waiting for a sign
That every thing will be fine

Cause I you don’t know what I been through
You don’t know what I seen
Another day
Another soul is taken away
And I can’t stop the sorrow
And it’s too late to think about tomorrow
These day has lasted for years
With nothing but endless tears

And I am still waiting for that sign
That every thing will be fine
And I am still waiting
Still waiting

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Still Waiting

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One Day Too Late

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Thank you @jessiee76
Thank you @rickvanmeijel
For giving me some good ideas there both good so I can’t choose so maybe we should put your two ideas to a vote @jessiee76 @rickvanmeijel

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No problem :grin:

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Thank you so much

Thank you alot

Every one here is nice why can’t More people be like you guys you’re nice and caring and i never felt like belonged anywhere but you guys give me a place were I belong so thank you to everyone that is here

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You could call it ‘What I know’ - cos you refer to what ‘you don’t know’ - so you could turn that around on itself.
Or you could be completely random and call it something like ‘Survival’ or ‘Survivor’…cos right now that’s what you are doing/or are - despite what’s happening around you, and what people are saying.

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This has a great flow
Has a Ace Masters tinge to it haha

Its deffo something I would write and something that flows in a way that would want it to flow

Overall has a great song

Song Title: The Tears of Tomorrow

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thank you that means alot to me

thank you @acemasters writing and listing to music helps me when I am mad or upset and I was so afired to share this but something in my head told me that I should share these

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Hi I can relate to what you said I think { Still Waiting} is a good title I just got home from work Just hanging out here catching up on my Lp My name is Kathy

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FInally had time to check this out, its pretty good! You should try singing it on youtube

For me personally I would call it “What Ive been through”

I would sing on YouTube but I must be the worst singer in the world I can’t sing but I can write well based on the comments I’ve been getting @darkn3ss

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For fun I tried singing the song you wrote with a FRGT/10 instrumental…Did not sound good LOL (Not your song but just I couldn’t get it to sync AT ALL) :smiley:

Yeah it would not be a good mix

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LOL yes it failed but was a nice attempt

Can you think of the pace for this song? Its hard to imagine…

I have no clue because I know that it will not work to any of my favorite songs

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@turners34 Hey It took me a year at least and I am still learning to memorize and sing all of Lp songs and I have others Disturbed, Cold Play , Muse, Creed, Staind, Breaking Benjamin, Skillet, Three Days Grace I can sing that whole cd Sometimes I get so excited I get confused to which verse is sung TOOO many to mention. its amazing the brain don’t get over loaded. I treat my brain like a pc upload or download Everyday I play all the LP cd’s like clockwork All I am saying is break it down in groups The music, the beat, guitar, base, keyboard, whatever instrament is used then do the same with the vocals Thats what I do to learn It takes time and eventually you’ll get it Practice Practice Some songs are easier than others. Some songs its the music tempo and some songs its the lyrics. Just felt like sharing my thoughts:heart: