Nicely written and I like that you explained the origin of the song. That makes it more understandable and relatable. I hope you won’t experience this feeling again in the future!
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Thank you, and that’s why I am going to start putting the origin of the song before start posting the actual song
And thank you @Honey8 @anna834 and @achilleas7
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Just about done with another song I will release it tomorrow or Friday
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Can’t wait 
Should I make you wait longer than 
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I think I made you guys wait long enough will post it when I get off work
Instead of making you wait until Friday afternoon
I feel like a real artist right now having so many people waiting to get a song from me
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**Prevailing**
I think I keep you guys waiting long enough
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Taking a step I could have never done
Having my time here in the sun
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Making it through the storm of regent
And paying my debt
Putting my hand on the mic
I am speaking my mind tonight
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Taking a step I could have never done
Having my time here in the sun
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Proving everyone so wrong
Up here singing this song
I have made it to the stage
My life on a new page
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Taking a step I could have never done
Having my time here in the sun
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Bridge 3 times
I have made it and survived
I have finally arrived
I am here fully alive
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
Taking a step I could have never done
Having my time here in the sun
Prevailing through the crowd
Speaking my mind so damn loud
Jumping over the wall
Not going to fall
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Nicely written! 
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Thank you dear glad you enjoyed it
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Love it!
Yeah! 
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Well done, great song 
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but worth! Its very nicely written! 
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This is pretty amazing work! Have you done any music to them yet? If not, feel free to book me - I’m available for hire to help record, write and arrange instrumental tracks for this particular song.
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No I am all self taught and I have only been writing for about 2 years but I am learning to play the guitar
And thank you so much. @octoberevansmusic but unfortunately I am broke right now and won’t have any money to pay you
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This sums up my life 
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Will be uploading empty spaces tomorrow
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will be waiting!!
**Empty Spaces**
Life is blinding
From what I am finding
The dark cloud over the sun
My heart weighing a ton
I have been that low
My personality taking a blow
I feel the struggle
I feel the pain
And only empty spaces remain
Time to fill them
One by one
My ice heart
Years of fragile art
I have been that low
My personality taking a blow
I have been that low
My personality taking a blow
I feel the struggle
I feel the pain
And only empty spaces remain
Time to fill them
One by one
Bridge 3 times
Just waiting for this to pass
And the strength to get off my ass
I have been that low
My personality taking a blow
I feel the struggle
I feel the pain
And only empty spaces remain
Time to fill them
One by one
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Really love it!
Just great!
Start to not just love your lyrics but also admire them!
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I feel like am a real artist right now and thank you for your kind feedback
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