Sending A Lifeline - NickGr

The Barracks
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Genre: nu-metal/alternative

Verse I:
I’m falling inside out
I stop as i feel no solid ground
I’m trying to look up to you
But the only thing i’ve found
Is your pain and fear you try to hide
I try to help you, but I don"t know how to fight

Pre-chorus
Stepping away from the ledge
Please,grab my hand!

Chorus:
I know you’re feeling alone now
And I stand here trying to catch you
I just want you to know: you can say it loud
And I’ll never abandon you

Verse II
You’re all closed up in your suffering
I never know what I should do
Trying to tell you: you’re not alone
Trying to ruin this shattering dome
Trying to scream these words to you

Pre-chorus
Stepping away from the ledge
Please,grab my hand!

Chorus:
I know you’re feeling alone now
And I stand here trying to catch you
I just want you to know: you can say it loud
And I’ll never abandon you

Bridge:
And I know the way you’re feeling now
I hate to see you’re going down
You’ve saved me you don’t even know how many times
And I want to help you leave this and arise

Chorus:
I know you’re feeling alone now
And I stand here trying to catch you
I just want you to know: you can say it loud
And I’ll never abandon you

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#2

Oh,a nd if anyone wishes to be added to the tag list of my works, please tag me

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#3

Very relatable lyrics
Loved it!

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#4

Like your lyric so much! @NickGr please pretty pleeaseee add me to your list! Could you? :pray: I can’t write lyrics but I like yours… :blush:

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#5

You don’t have to ask, friend )

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#6

Thank you sooooo much! :blush: many hugs to you! :hugs:

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#7

I think this should be ‘help’ right?

Inspiring lyrics though, I feel you’re getting better at writing and also at writing English in particular. (I’m not the best person to judge you on that since I’m Dutch lol)

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#8

Mistype, thanx for telling)

ahh thanks!

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#9

That a good song kerp it up the good work

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#10

Thanks to made my day. I needed heard/read something like that.

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#11

awww… i like this one its so sweet :grinning: :slight_smile:

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#12

Let’s call this “the friendships somg” @NickGr :sunny: Because exactly what you are telling with your lyrics is straight out the experience I made with you bro:
You are always there for me- if I am on the edge or on the top… you are always there- supportive to me :grinning:or hyping with me :stuck_out_tongue: Or making my laugh until my stomach hurts :joy:

Your lyrics are expressing right all this to me, sure - thats me- but making the reader feel with lyrics is the goal of writing … so :confetti_ball:congratz bro- you made it :sunny:

Heey @annejprado :sunny:haven’t seen ya in a while, how is life going?

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#13

Awww :hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs: I try to be

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#14

ich empfinde dass der text von diesen Song,wunderschön
danke dass ich es lesen dürfte:unicorn:

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#15

@theearlywalker, need your help!

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#16

okay ,but im auter org?? what kann i help you?pleas

#17

Lool - a german fan? :joy:

Hey soldier @iviminimal9- this is an english speaking forum only! It sounds like you have used a translator to put it into german, but … it doesn’t sounds like if you are german :thinking:

@NickGr in english it means kinda this: thanx that I was allowed to read these wonderful lyrics !

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#18

thank you,yes i translate ,sorry for mystake

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#19

:disappointed_relieved:

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#20

Oh don’t worry soldier, everything is fiiine :sunny:, and welcome on bord :grin:, check out the games section and have fun with us :confetti_ball:

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