ot good to know, thank you!
Ok so if everyone is happy with me going first to kick things off i am more then happy to do so
As I saw 12 unread posts I thought there used to be half song written and thereās gonna be my part.
Have a nice day @everyone
@theearlywalker
They have already voted for the theme. Scroll up and you will see that most votes went to my songā¦
@acemaster
Itās just a title, really. Itās not a song yet But thanks dude, that is
very nice of you. If youād like to go first then thatād be cool.
And hope you have a great birthday!
@jabinquaken
Unfortunately no song, just a bunch of bla blaā¦
Since @acemaster will start with 2 lines of the 1st rap verse, that would mean @jessicarister would write the bridge. Is that ok?
Starting all over again and rearranged the writing parts:
[Please let me know if you are all ok with these partsā¦]
I can handle the bridge, just get the song going. Iām a bit rusty.
My lines:
I am left in a place, where I face, memories I canāt erase
The vision of hurt isnāt clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear
@the_termin8r
Your turn
Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
Iāll watch fear bleed as itās what Iāll kill
Iām a natural skeptic, donāt trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when itās actually salt
Your turnā¦
@samuel_the_leader
[Pre chorus,2 lines]
Donāt say itās just a cyst, itās more than that
Donāt say itās benign, itās much worse than that
Iāll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be
(verse 2)
Itās not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for godās bliss
@gatsie I really like your lines btw
This is becoming interesting.
Thanks @rickvanmeijel
Pls donāt take this as an insult, but for me being a church person I myself would never say I donāt need Godās bliss in a song But weāre all entitled to our own views of courseā¦
Anywaysā¦
[verse 1]
I am left in a place, where I face, memories I canāt erase
The vision of hurt isnāt clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear
Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
Iāll watch fear bleed as itās what Iāll kill
Being strong is all that I know
Weakness, itās something that I wonāt show
Iām a natural skeptic, donāt trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when itās actually salt
[pre-chorus]
Donāt say itās just a cyst, itās more than that
Donāt say itās benign, itās much worse than that[chorus]
I wonāt let this take over me,
Just watch and see, just watch and see
Iāll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be
(verse 2)
Itās not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for godās bliss
It is your turn to add 2 rap lines:
@theearlywalker
Thereās no hurry. She can add them when she has time.
this is what they always told me, you have to do it on your own
on each prayer they frown me, and still didnāt get the riddle solved
omg, now the hardest part ā¦ marking the lines above an put them back in right orderā¦ on tablett, lads and gentsā¦ hooray,fits I hope?
@Gatsie & @rickvanmeijel : as a believer in god, I tried my best to turn directionā¦
Song seems to be coming along nicely
Yes, I remember. At work right now. Thinking of it half the day.