Minerals - The Unity Of Us

ot good to know, thank you!

Ok so if everyone is happy with me going first to kick things off i am more then happy to do so

As I saw 12 unread posts I thought there used to be half song written and there’s gonna be my part. :smile:

Have a nice day @everyone

@theearlywalker
They have already voted for the theme. Scroll up and you will see that most votes went to my song…

@acemaster
It’s just a title, really. It’s not a song yet :stuck_out_tongue: But thanks dude, that is
very nice of you. If you’d like to go first then that’d be cool.
And hope you have a great birthday!

@jabinquaken
Unfortunately no song, just a bunch of bla bla…

Since @acemaster will start with 2 lines of the 1st rap verse, that would mean @jessicarister would write the bridge. Is that ok?

Starting all over again and rearranged the writing parts:

[Please let me know if you are all ok with these parts…]

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I can handle the bridge, just get the song going. I’m a bit rusty.

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My lines:

I am left in a place, where I face, memories I can’t erase
The vision of hurt isn’t clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear

@the_termin8r
Your turn

Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
I’ll watch fear bleed as it’s what I’ll kill

@AJ_7

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Being strong is all that I know
Weakness, it’s something that I won’t show

@gatsie

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I’m a natural skeptic, don’t trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when it’s actually salt

Your turn…
@samuel_the_leader
[Pre chorus,2 lines]

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Don’t say it’s just a cyst, it’s more than that
Don’t say it’s benign, it’s much worse than that

@AJ_7

I won’t let this take over me,
Just watch and see, just watch and see

@rickvanmeijel

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I’ll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be

(verse 2)
It’s not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for god’s bliss

@theearlywalker

@gatsie I really like your lines btw

This is becoming interesting.

Thanks @rickvanmeijel
Pls don’t take this as an insult, but for me being a church person I myself would never say I don’t need God’s bliss in a song :slight_smile: But we’re all entitled to our own views of course…

Anyways…

[verse 1]
I am left in a place, where I face, memories I can’t erase
The vision of hurt isn’t clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear
Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
I’ll watch fear bleed as it’s what I’ll kill
Being strong is all that I know
Weakness, it’s something that I won’t show
I’m a natural skeptic, don’t trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when it’s actually salt

[pre-chorus]
Don’t say it’s just a cyst, it’s more than that
Don’t say it’s benign, it’s much worse than that

[chorus]
I won’t let this take over me,
Just watch and see, just watch and see
I’ll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be

(verse 2)
It’s not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for god’s bliss

It is your turn to add 2 rap lines:
@theearlywalker

You know she goes to bed early:

There’s no hurry. She can add them when she has time. :slight_smile:

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this is what they always told me, you have to do it on your own
on each prayer they frown me, and still didn’t get the riddle solved

omg, now the hardest part … marking the lines above an put them back in right order… on tablett, lads and gents… hooray,fits I hope?

@Gatsie & @rickvanmeijel : as a believer in god, I tried my best to turn direction… :upside_down:

@jabinQuaken

Song seems to be coming along nicely

Your turn to add 2 lines:
@jabinQuaken

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Yes, I remember. At work right now. Thinking of it half the day.