Minerals - The Unity Of Us

ot good to know, thank you!

Ok so if everyone is happy with me going first to kick things off i am more then happy to do so

As I saw 12 unread posts I thought there used to be half song written and thereā€™s gonna be my part. :smile:

Have a nice day @everyone

@theearlywalker
They have already voted for the theme. Scroll up and you will see that most votes went to my songā€¦

@acemaster
Itā€™s just a title, really. Itā€™s not a song yet :stuck_out_tongue: But thanks dude, that is
very nice of you. If youā€™d like to go first then thatā€™d be cool.
And hope you have a great birthday!

@jabinquaken
Unfortunately no song, just a bunch of bla blaā€¦

Since @acemaster will start with 2 lines of the 1st rap verse, that would mean @jessicarister would write the bridge. Is that ok?

Starting all over again and rearranged the writing parts:

[Please let me know if you are all ok with these partsā€¦]

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I can handle the bridge, just get the song going. Iā€™m a bit rusty.

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My lines:

I am left in a place, where I face, memories I canā€™t erase
The vision of hurt isnā€™t clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear

@the_termin8r
Your turn

Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
Iā€™ll watch fear bleed as itā€™s what Iā€™ll kill

@AJ_7

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Being strong is all that I know
Weakness, itā€™s something that I wonā€™t show

@gatsie

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Iā€™m a natural skeptic, donā€™t trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when itā€™s actually salt

Your turnā€¦
@samuel_the_leader
[Pre chorus,2 lines]

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Donā€™t say itā€™s just a cyst, itā€™s more than that
Donā€™t say itā€™s benign, itā€™s much worse than that

@AJ_7

I wonā€™t let this take over me,
Just watch and see, just watch and see

@rickvanmeijel

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Iā€™ll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be

(verse 2)
Itā€™s not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for godā€™s bliss

@theearlywalker

@gatsie I really like your lines btw

This is becoming interesting.

Thanks @rickvanmeijel
Pls donā€™t take this as an insult, but for me being a church person I myself would never say I donā€™t need Godā€™s bliss in a song :slight_smile: But weā€™re all entitled to our own views of courseā€¦

Anywaysā€¦

[verse 1]
I am left in a place, where I face, memories I canā€™t erase
The vision of hurt isnā€™t clear, with nobody here, blinded by my own fear
Courage is a need I must fight to fulfill
Iā€™ll watch fear bleed as itā€™s what Iā€™ll kill
Being strong is all that I know
Weakness, itā€™s something that I wonā€™t show
Iā€™m a natural skeptic, donā€™t trust it all by default
Sometimes it might look like sugar when itā€™s actually salt

[pre-chorus]
Donā€™t say itā€™s just a cyst, itā€™s more than that
Donā€™t say itā€™s benign, itā€™s much worse than that

[chorus]
I wonā€™t let this take over me,
Just watch and see, just watch and see
Iā€™ll show you all the things
that I can be, that I can be

(verse 2)
Itā€™s not always been like this, I had to fight for this
Did it all myself, no need for godā€™s bliss

It is your turn to add 2 rap lines:
@theearlywalker

You know she goes to bed early:

Thereā€™s no hurry. She can add them when she has time. :slight_smile:

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this is what they always told me, you have to do it on your own
on each prayer they frown me, and still didnā€™t get the riddle solved

omg, now the hardest part ā€¦ marking the lines above an put them back in right orderā€¦ on tablett, lads and gentsā€¦ hooray,fits I hope?

@Gatsie & @rickvanmeijel : as a believer in god, I tried my best to turn directionā€¦ :upside_down:

@jabinQuaken

Song seems to be coming along nicely

Your turn to add 2 lines:
@jabinQuaken

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Yes, I remember. At work right now. Thinking of it half the day.