Incinerate The Air - The Unity of Us

The Barracks
#81

@gatsie you are next to complete verse 2

#82

Iā€™ve got the titles for next two polls. Interesting.

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#83

I think of a name on the day, itā€™s more spontanous

When I write my own stuff itā€™s rare for me to write around a title i tend to title after the first chorus

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#84

I do that as well but I quite liked this one.

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#85

And thats cool when i think of good ones i too write them down for future ref hehe

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#86

@gatsie
Anyone home :stuck_out_tongue:

#87

Sorry guys, really hectic days. But here goesā€¦

my line:
Consumed by the flames of desperation

#88

@theearlywalker 2nd pre-chorus awaits remember to try and make it different from the 1st pre-chorus and then I will start on chorus 2

@gatsie good job spacing out the song :slight_smile:

#89

you wonder about the me releasing my beast inside?
the pain n pressure has buildt a diamond -see right
cause my shine Iā€™ ll no longer hide tonight

@acemasters Gent, may I please you tocopy it all in one, cause I always go crazy on it :fearful:

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#90

I will work on this tomorrow

#91

Time to stop the anguish and release the flames Iā€™m breathing out!
When the feeling is burning away the fire I canā€™t live without!
Now is the time to stand up and break out!

You wonder why I am burning inside?
I Tell you itā€™s the heat from the beast that I hide!
Step aside 'cause I gonna burst tonight!

Now you better run!
Heatā€™s creeping on your heels!
I am your darkest fears,
The ashes on your teeth,
Cause I am running hell!
See you burn!
Dying on your knees!
There is no way to breathe!
'Cause anger you released
Incinerates the air itself!

The inferno is upon you what will you do
The fire glows brightly, I will see this through
Consumed by the flames of desperation

You wonder about me releasing my beast inside?
The pain and pressure has built a diamond to see it right
'Cause my shine Iā€™ll no longer hide tonight

My Chorus:

So you better hide
The heat will seek you out
Intoxicating
The air that you breathe
Is poisoning your lungs
Thereā€™s no point in fighting
As it chokes you to death
Donā€™t you bloody dare
Because I donā€™t really care
As I Incinerate the air

@samuel_the_leader

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#92

@samuel_the_leader
donā€™t forget thw build up

#93

@jabinquaken What shall we do? @samuel_the_leader hasnā€™t responded in the last two daysā€¦
Do we press on or give Sam a little more time?!?

I understand we are all busy, but try and pop on and say so, so we are all updated?

@the_termin8r are you ready for final Chorus?!?

#94

@samuel_the_leader you got time till 23:00 bst. Then we willl continue.

#95

Well, I never bothered with creating a title & genre in the first placeā€¦

#96

So youā€™re here. Glad that you are. Will you make the bridge to this angry song weā€™re writing?

#97

Honestly, Iā€™m fed up.

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#98

Sad to read. Wonā€™t participate anymore?

#100

Chorus 3: Itā€™s a mix of 1 & 2 with some personal edits. All the bits in brackets are said immediately after the previous line that isnā€™t in brackets.

Now you better run!
(So you better hide)
Heatā€™s creeping on your heels!
(The heat will seek you out)
I am your darkest fears,
(Out of hell I rise)
The ashes on your teeth,
(The air that you breathe)
Cause I am running hell!
(The blaze of anguish)
See you burn!
(Thereā€™s no point in fighting)
Dying on your knees!
(As it chokes you to death)
There is no way to breathe!
(Burn the bridges that you built)
'Cause anger you released
(Watch the world burn)
As I Incinerate the air
(Watch it all burn in hell!)

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#101

It only took 100 posts but we finally got there

@samuel_the_leader sorry to hear you were a bit fed up

Just want to know if you wished to continue with The Unity of Us or if you wished to leave

Whichever you decide I will back!!! Let me know

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