just copy and paste
i always use my phone for this lol
i see its my turn
will do it in abit
Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
Itās not like I havenāt seen it before
Cause all this time Iāve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say
The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins
Iām falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow
Thereās no hope for better tomorrow
My eyes canāt see through world so black
In this endless vicious cycle, Iām falling back
It feels like I am supposed to be
Someone else who I donāt wanna be
Someone that isnāt me
Iām falling back into the same old routine
Do you not see how shattered I have been?
Resisting so hard whatās under my skin
No matter what I try I just canāt win
But I wonāt give up, I have to keep trying
and stand all that faith is trying
Because for me there is no dying
Donāt want life to fade to black
So I stop myself from falling back
No, you canāt have my soul
My inner demons are already doomed
But I feel I canāt escape the cold
But I will fight as long as Iām alive
Iām in full control
@the_termin8r
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Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
Itās not like I havenāt seen it before
Cause all this time Iāve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say
The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins
Iām falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow
Thereās no hope for better tomorrow
My eyes canāt see through world so black
In this endless vicious cycle, Iām falling back
It feels like I am supposed to be
Someone else who I donāt wanna be
Someone that isnāt me
Iām falling back into the same old routine
Do you not see how shattered I have been?
Resisting so hard whatās under my skin
No matter what I try I just canāt win
But I wonāt give up, I have to keep trying
and stand all that faith is trying
Because for me there is no dying
Donāt want life to fade to black
So I stop myself from falling back
No, you canāt have my soul
My inner demons are already doomed
But I feel I canāt escape the cold
But I will fight as long as Iām alive
Iām in full control
This agony will no longer take its toll
Iām lost, which segment of the song are we at? Iām not sure who to tag as the song doesnāt seem to line up with the OP.
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Guys? weāre lost a little[quote=āthe_termin8r, post:43, topic:21987ā]
No, you canāt have my soul
My inner demons are already doomed
But I feel I canāt escape the cold
But I will fight as long as Iām alive
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this seems to be the bridgeā¦ next is the chorus 2 that will have 2 additional lines
so itās @jabinquakenās turn. Iām not sure what to do with the rest of it
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no no no @the_termin8r was verse 2 line 5
@jabinquaken is line 6
@gatsie line 7
bridge follows and then chorus 2
final build up before the final chorus
good thing i am on things lmao
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From the lyrics it looks like weāre miles past verse 2.
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^
Sooā¦ what now? Starting another thread? 
Or I could go through the whole thread later and see where we went wrong.
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Done some editing to what happened this is the break down as I see it just need the final chorus
Verse 1
Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
Itās not like I havenāt seen it before
Cause all this time Iāve been broken
Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.
Running my mouth but I have nothing to say
Pre-Chorus
The air is caving in around me again
Suffocation, oh, this is how it begins
Chorus
Iām falling back, into the darkness, into the sorrow
Thereās no hope for better tomorrow
My eyes canāt see through world so black
In this endless vicious cycle, Iām falling back
Verse 2
It feels like I am supposed to be
Someone else who I donāt wanna be
Someone that isnāt me
Iām falling back into the same old routine
Do you not see how shattered I have been?
Resisting so hard whatās under my skin
No matter what I try I just canāt win
Chorus 2
But I wonāt give up, I have to keep trying
and stand all that faith is trying
Because for me there is no dying
Donāt want life to fade to black
So I stop myself from falling back
Build-Up
No, you canāt have my soul
My inner demons are already doomed
But I feel I canāt escape the cold
But I will fight as long as Iām alive
Iām in full control
This agony will no longer take its toll
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build up or a.k.a final build before the chorus like S.I.B & I.T.E between chorus 2 and final chorus 3 you have that bridge between the 2
I call it build up or final build
Itās not mentioned in Patās plan though.
Iāll go over the song nowā¦
I found where we went wrong. After @AJ_7 did her line for the bridge she was supposed to tag @jabinquaken to add an extra line to the existing chorus 2 and then it would be @NickGr adding the final line to C2. So any new lines after AJās shouldnāt be there and it should be Jabin and then Nick.
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Oh Gosh! Sorry guys! I Thought we were doing verse 2
Donāt worry about it 
There were a few times where I had to make sure I had the order right as well.
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Thatās why I edited the layout of the song to get some sense of direction
the song is basically finished in my eyes
just needs the last bit
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Wow I totally forgot about this. So whatās happening now? Looks pretty much finished to me, really
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Seems finished. Also any idea on whatās happening with Pat? I dropped her a message the other day, it says sheās read it but hasnāt replied. Is she mad again orā¦?
Same here. Worried about her. Hope, nothing bad had happened.
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Yeah itās been quiet without her 