Falling Back - The Unity Of Us

The Barracks
#1

There we go

Verse 1:
@NickGr
Line 2:
@theearlywalker
Line 3:
@acemasters
Line 4:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 5:
@the_termin8r
Line 6:
@gatsie

Pre-Chorus:
Line 1:
@jabinquaken
Line 2:
@AJ_7

Chorus:
Line 1:
@the_termin8r
Line 2:
@NickGr
Line 3:
@jabinquaken
Line 4:
@gatsie

Verse 2:
Line 1:
@theearlywalker
Line 2:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 3:
@AJ_7
Line 4:
@acemasters
Line 5:
@the_termin8r
Line 6:
@jabinquaken
Line 7:
@gatsie

Pre-chorus(I think it would be the same as the first one, but I’ll accept any ideas)

Chorus 2:
Line 1:
@AJ_7
Line 2:
@theearlywalker
Line 3:
@the_termin8r
Line 4:
@gatsie
Line 5:
@acemasters

Bridge:
Line 1:
@theearlywalker
Line 2:
@NickGr
Line 3:
@rickvanmeijel
Line 4:
@AJ_7

Chorus 2(let it stay the same, but let’s add a couple of lines)
Line 6:
@jabinquaken
Line 7:
@NickGr

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#3

What is this is it a game or something. Just explain what is it about .

#4

The Unity Of Us is a lyricwriting unofficial community formed on the forum by our lyricwriting master @acemasters

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#5

@NickGr oh really I did not know about it so what will you guys be doing then.

#6

Check “the next project” thread

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#7

ok which one

#8

Mm, the last one, I’ve written in that today

#9

Let’s start:

Standing at the forgotten shore
@theearlywalker

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#10

ok thanks I will look. later im in school right now so yeah.

#11

I should point out that i might be a day or two late with my line.

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#12

@NickGr lyric writing master

Such high praise indeed :slight_smile:

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#13

@acemasters

@coolcat96 can you please stopp spamming all the threads with your “how is this working” question, sometimes several times in one thread,aka plug? All posts have an OP ( first post of every thread) where you can read all rules! I think I speak at last for the regulars, that it starts to bother!
And don 't anwer to my post, it’s not needed! And be please so respectfull to respect, this thread you must be “invited” to have part!

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#14

Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
@rickvanmeijel your turn

@coolcat96 I agree with @theearlywalker
You are young and I get you want to get involved but many of these post are self explained at the top post

If you truely don’t understand the nature of the topic then ask
But it seems to be on every topic

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#15

FINE! then I will respect it @theearlywalker and @acemasters ok sorry sometimes I don’t get certain things and I just want some one to explain to me ok. I’m very sorry that I’m becoming a bother to you two ok I won’t ask no more all I will do is i’ll just read the directions and try to figure it out ok.

#16

Clearly you don’t understand the concept of anger. You have no reason to be getting angry with us. It’s not just Pat and Ace, all of us are getting annoyed. I’ve remained relatively polite and patient but I’ve had it now.

There is no way you could be 20, you behave like a 12 year old, constantly asking stupid questions to which you have been given multiple answers (most of which as Pat said are in the OPs) yet you seem to ignore them and keep asking.

If you’re in uni then you’d have no issue telling us what course you’re doing and explaining a basic concept from the field you are studying.

Then there’s the fact that you cannot use grammar to save your life. You cannot possibly be born in America. There is nothing wrong with being a foreigner, just drop what we’re all suspecting is an act.

We’ve all been quite patient and polite but this is starting to get ridiculous.

This is probably getting taken down but I don’t care.
Also sorry for the long post.

Now back to the song…
I believe it’s @rickvanmeijel

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#17

Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken

@the_termin8r

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#18

Standing at the forgotten shore
Again I see the gates of hell wide open
It’s not like I haven’t seen it before
Cause all this time I’ve been broken

Like a shattered bottle I get swept away.

@gatsie

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#19

mm… isn’t it @gatsie’s turn now?

#20

yes, it is indeed

#21

Oops, sorry. Edited my post.

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