I did say that with the title this song could go in either direction
Yup. The first lines went dark, though.
Do we want to re-write the song? I think there’s no issue if everyone is okay with it.
Leave the transition of the song direction for now and let it take its route
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Guys, sorry – gotta do my lines tonight , things are a bit messy these days
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lol 
just saw the discussion in the other thread- that´s a bit messy too- anyway- I jump in with telling my opinion on this:
sending you a bonecrusher @NickGr 
stay strong 
Take your time Nick, never rush creativity 
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Nick? @NickGr?! I know you’re very busy- shall I take your turn for now? Sending strength and bonecrusher 
Edit: @NickGr since I know about uni and all the stuff you have to do atm, I think it‘s ok to tag and remind you again. Or are you empty with lines?? 
So, my idea is that, if you haven’t shown up - until Monday I gonna take your line and tag you then when my next line comes up- ok? Let it flow bro
I will do the line if its not done by tomorrow!
Verse1:
Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard
Pre-Chorus:
Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart
Chorus
One day, I know it for sure
Line 2: @framos1792
Line 3: Marilau
Line 4: NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)
Verse 2
Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters
End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus
Ok I took Nicks line 
and imo now in the chorus the song could change from dark to light…
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Oi I was gonna do it but got called into work lol
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Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard
Pre-Chorus:
Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart
Chorus
One day, I know it for sure
I’ll move beyond what I endure
Line 3: @Marilau
Line 4: NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)
Verse 2
Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters
End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus
I apologize for the delay 
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@Marilau ( maybe you take her line now @acemasters? To keep it flowing? And first calling in advance @Dr.NickGr - ( ever considered to change your name here? Would fit perfectly 
@NickGr
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Im at work today so if someone hasnt picked up the line i will do so after work
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Perfect 
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If you don’t care, I’ll take her turn.
verse 1
Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard
Pre-Chorus:
Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart
Chorus
One day, I know it for sure
I’ll move beyond what I endure
Line 3: The emptiness is let behind
Line 4: @NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)
Verse 2
Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters
End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus
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I crashed the minute i got home lol
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