I love your song ! You’re a talented writer ! I think it was a very good idea to write it in the third person, it gives the song a deeper meaning !
If this week’s theme was “Escape”, what about writing about “Coming back” next week ?
I love your song ! You’re a talented writer ! I think it was a very good idea to write it in the third person, it gives the song a deeper meaning !
If this week’s theme was “Escape”, what about writing about “Coming back” next week ?
Nicely done
Oh yes… lets see what comes up in my mind. I am sorry to worry y’all actually. Cause i think I’ll drop the idea of themes… or i guess I’ll continue. I don’t know myself cause i am a bit more busy with some school subjects. This week creations won’t be possible. Well thanks a lot for you kind words and help @Mel_4 and @everyone
Thanks! Glad you like it
Okay. Here’s the next ballad.
CHANGES
The time when everything is normal
The moment which is quite familiar and expected
The hour pre - planned perfectly in mind
Those known moments are always respected
Our brains have already made us visualize
Some specific moments of our future
Since hours they are anticipated and precise
The ones which we begin to nurture
But later when you come to know
About the changes which emerges from aught
And your mind goes blank with naught
You recall normal days for which you fought
But dear, life gives you another chance to learn
To learn from that special war
To cope with the changes, it wants to teach
To turn pain into power every hour
We all are adaptable to changes
And have thousands of them throughout our life
Some cope up with them quickly
Others are equally respected for their time
This coping strength depends on
The way we welcome the change
Don’t panic, it’s just a part of life
Like winter, summers and rains
A new day with new resolutions
New imaginations and new goals
Try to build positive temptations
For trying new games and roles
Let this beautiful start begin
Let change change our lifestyle
Just welcome them with grace
And love life until you exile
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I really love it ! You’re a really good songwriter !
And I would love to be tagged, thanks !
Thanks a lot dear friend. You’ll be tagged in my ballads, writings and music. Art will be on “playing with the drawing tools” thread and photography on “when and where”
Glad you liked it dear friend!
THIS!!!
This!
I really like this ballad! yeah, we have to accept changes of our life, because we can learn and find happiness in new beginning! well written!
I am out of likes dear! Will give ya one later thanks a lot for your lovely words! I am glad you liked it !
That was wonderful @honey8! well as always but again, very relatable words and very positive
Countryside visit was nice to read, and the pictures were very pretty I’m happy you had a great time, we all need a breath of fresh air
Thanks a lot dear friend!
I am glad you liked both , the ballad and the post. Yes and now i again feel like running away from the duties!
“Moving on isn’t easy
But its the most beautiful step
It takes you away from
The past where you existed…”
Thank you @Honey8 your writing hits the soul every time just when you need it
Thanks a lot for the compliment. Will send ya an email tonight. Hang on… stay strong all will be fine
Ah I’m good, ghosts of the past vanish as quick as they come but thank you
Your words are just encouraging
I’ll be expecting it
Your welcomed anytime friend keep smilin’. It maybe one of the most busiest day for me. So will send tonight. Thanks for patience
Oohh! I am sorry I didn’t post anything here!
Here i go with the next ones… and firstly
The liebster award - it is a WordPress award i was nominated for in which the wrtiters are asked some questions. Its just a kind of “discovering new blogs” and knowing about the writers Here’s the link if anyone wants to check out the post…
https://getinspiredin.wordpress.com/2017/12/31/liebster-award/
Okay… now the time an articles! I wrote these one quite long back and i am sorry to post it late.
A WALK
“Every walk can have many faces or sides
It may be cheerful, lonely and wise
It may be for wiping away the pain
Maybe just for pleasure, or in vain”
A lonely walk along the road is always pleasure-giving. Just grab your favourite shoes, your jacket and lock the doors behind. Along with the doors, lock your everyday duties, your world where you exist, your pain, suffering fights, friends and everything else. With your every step you feel yourself. With every breath you inhale the positivity and exhale the negatives. Every time you blink your eyes, you wash away small dust particles of anger, sorrow and pain. You feel every cell of your body as you move forward. You surround yourself with a strange beautiful energy, an energy which gives you sense of belongingness. A sense of being YOU.
Along with that you get an ability. An ability to admire. A new sense called ‘Sense of Beauty’. You start admiring nature. Your fingers thoughtlessly move on leaves, the small bushes. Insects on trees begin to seem so mesmerising, full of inexplicable beauty. You can finally hear the birds singing and differentiate the notes of every bird.
As this process goes on, you forget your steps. They continue to move themselves. You keep moving forward, admiring and using your new sense. You have no idea of hours passed here. But you love and embrace each moment you’ve spent.
And if this walk was to dissolve your sorrow into naught, you begin to realise that
“Moving on isn’t easy
But its the most beautiful step
It takes you away from
The past where you existed…”
Let the reason be anything. Either wiping away your pain, or for escaping the world, every walk has a strange energy to make you feel your existence. A sense of being YOU.
Dear reader, it’s a great busy world. We’ve got work and goals to be completed in short notice. We will work hard. The goals will be completed. But in this race we should not forget about ourselves. Spend time with yourself, just for a break. Walks don’t kill time, they rejuvenate you and refill your potential to work on your goals. In the end, don’t forget to embrace yourself
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That was beautiful and full of truth. I regularly take walks in nature and it feels great. Clears your head from all the latest bullshit
Did you win the Liebster award? Or can we vote somewhere?
I know right! Even i love to wakk in nature!! To kick away all stress! Glad you liked it dude!
( Like for you tmro! Till then have this! )
No… its not a winning award. Its just discovering new blogs… Asking and answering the questions! You can check the link… you’ll get to know… the rules are written just on the start