Really well written! your ballads/articles always have this optimistic view even in the darkest moments… your merit to help people thinking positive in the hardest time… 
Once again very positive vibes @Honey8 
and to realize that you are only 16 years old is just making me feel you will have a great future 
this positivity follows the karma rules and that is absolutely awesome
Great work once again. Don’t let the city drag you down 
Thanks @lpfan61. Happy to hear these words. Yes that’s the main motive… to help people think positive even in hardest times 
Thanks dear @theearlywalker 
i am sooo happy to hear this. Don’t forget you guys inspire me to write more. So thanks to you all I don’t know about what will happen in future. But i am sure my soul will remain same crazy, happy, childish, and positive!
Thanks @rickvanmeijel yes I won’t let the city drag me… there are so many things to make us sad and depressed… but looking a a bit above that we find happy things
Thanks for your lovely words… Means a lot
Alright so I’ve written my first short story guys! 
Congo to me! 
It’s really childish… as i am lol 
Hope you enjoy it! And to all the writers and readers! I need your reviews so that i can improve. Comments suggestions welcomed 
SEASONS
It was winter season of December in Switzerland. Snow had recently stopped leaving a lovely view with trees covered with snow. This exquisite view could be seen from the window of a small cottage in the village near the mountains.
“Hey Mom! It looks like Olaf! See I’ve made it so nice, it just needs a nose”
This joyful voice was of a little kid named Timo. He was overjoyed after making his first ever snowman whom he dreamt to be alive!
Mom wore a beautiful pleasant smile on her face. Her hands were busy taking out warm and delicious cookies from the oven, just baked. She put them down and took out her gloves, handed a small carrot to Timo…
“Here you go dear, take you carrot and make you snowman’s nose. I’ll clean up here and come to see my son’s first snowman! I’ll be there in 10 minuets!” She kissed Timo’s forehead and got back to work.
She cleaned up the kitchen and did the dishes. In the meanwhile Timo settled carrot nose on his snowman’s snowy face and sat near the window staring at it, living in day dreams, playing with snowman in his dreamland…
“Lost in your dreamland, Timo? Oh! Look at that! It’s so beautiful lovely snowman! Very nice dear I am so proud of you!” Mom came in surprised to see a small snowman in the garden.
Timo was brought back from his dream land through these words. He looked up at his mom who was standing with a plate delicious cookies, Timo’s favourite flavour, Choco Almond.
He grinned and hugged his mom, grabbed a cookie and enjoyed its first bite.
“Mom this is so tasty!!”
“Yes son I made them for you. I know these ones are you favourites” Mom replied with a lovely broad smiley face.
“Thank you mom! You are the best!” Timo was overjoyed and sat on the couch eating cookies.
They both settles down making themselves warm near the chimney. Mom looked up through a magzine while eating cookies while Timo still staring at his snowman through the window and lost in his day dreams.
“Mom why do we have seasons? Can’t I enjoy entire life in winter making so many snowmans?!”
Timo asked this with a sweet and serious expression. He was enjoying his favourite season holidays and never wished to go back to school.
Mom smiled and looked out of the window towards the snowy trees and beauty of the season.
“Child, nature has seasons. It is simply made in that way. In fact, everything has seasons. You see a little plant grow into a big tree. Soon you will also grow taller and become a big man”
“Yes mom! I’ll grow taller! I’ll become tall like daddy one day!” Timo exclaimed with full excitement.
“Yes child you will. Let me explain it to you. These seasons help the plant to grow. In rainy season, they get water which are absorbed by the roots and transported to all parts of plant. The autumn is the fall season, when all the leave of the tress fall down. The trees are empty! They look ugly but beautiful! Then you have spring in which tress bloom and you can see fruits, flowers and a very joyful pleasing environment. This is like achieving a great thing.
Same is with our lives dear. We have seasons which are defined by situations and our feelings. Sometimes we are happy, sometimes we are sad, sometimes we may feel overjoyed and alive, sometimes we may feel depressed but everything helps us to grow like plant. You can compare our happy times with spring, sad times with autumn and alive overjoyed times with rains, they all are connected. Each season, each feeling is important for us. It help us to learn living, help us to grow. We should just be greatful for what we have and learn from our mistakes."
“Cause seasons are meant for change
And change is meant for growth
Be grateful for every season
Inprinting lears in you, it goes”
Mom looked at Timo and saw him asleep on the couch. The little boy was tired after playing. She smiled and covered him with a blanket.
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Congrats on your first lil story!!
It’s like a fable with a nice moral! I enjoyed reading it!keep it up! 
Already read it on your website yesterday! 
It’s a nice metaphor and well written
Its like something out of a Disney movie, lol, great job again, and thank you for sharing. I always look forward to reading your work, and you never disappoint, but seem to exceed expectations. 
You should be a photographer/writer lol, cause why not both?
My favorite line!!! 
Ok! If you could look at me now, you probably would ruanaway jajaja (I’m fangirling 
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Awww your story is pure, innocence and shows a sincere affection. The way you express this feelings is so, so, so excellent!!! I can’t describe how so good I feel with myself right now. You deserve just the best!!!
About the story itself:
It’s simple in the context: A boy who dreams with a wonderful world and his mom is supporting him. That’s what I love of you! you make something bigger even bigger. unlike me, you explain this lovely relation between his mom and him with short dialogues and very easy to understand who is speaking. Once again you deserve the best!!!
Keep with that lovely spirit and be proud of your word because it is best than many of my stories, and I am not kidding This words needs more love and stories like this.
@Honey8 it’s beautiful!!! Heartmelting, I feel like I’m child now and this words “change is meant for growth”, are so important, I wanna keep it in my heart. Thank you
Honey another master piece you are a wonderful writer and always beautiful stay strong and continue to write never give up have this
Thanks angel! Yes happy that you enjoyed reading it! And i enjoyed creating it! Keep smilin’ friend! 
Aww yes! I got a like 
thanks bro! Happy you liked it!
True! Like a disney movie! Not frozen guys lol. I made it in that way. Childish, most simple english (cause I don’t even have a food vocab lol:sweat_smile:)
Thank you for reading it! Lol… I’ll tell what I’d be… Photographer, writer, influential speaker, music producer, artist, inspirer my crazy buzzy dreams! 
Thanks!
Brother this is all just awessoomee! Like I can’t say anything. You left me like without words. Thanks. Glad. So happy. All these words are really small in front of what i feel. I feel like heaven. I am not that good dear. Sometimes i fear do i Really deserve such appreciation. Yes i kept the story very innocent. Cause i am still a kid. A playful idiot kid. And wish to make that snowman one day thanks a lot. Like big big big big big thanks you!!! This is for you allll! 
Aww mybdear pippi soldier! Yes those lines. I am surprised from where dis they came in my head. Beautiful right? Stole my heart too. Thanks!
Sure my angel i smile by spreading smiles and am inspired my spreading Inspiration. I’ll keep writing. Thanks a lot
And to everyone else. Thanks for making me who i am . Since i have joined in here, I’ve been more inspired to work on my hobbies. People taught me. I never knrw anything about making music. Writing was still stranger to me. Thanks for teaching me. All my Inspirations
This.
Well, you’re going for an excellent path! We are going to support you in all we can
Ok… I guess this is what happens when two deepest and lovely souls collision each other we don’t have words to express what we feel. Maybe because there aren’t words to express clearly what we feel. So… I just can say thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it so much!
But you will. I know it!
Hey! Me too. And that’s what I write, to defeat this fear. So don’t be afraid, you are not alone in this
I wouldn’t call you idiot, maybe crazy (in the good meaning of the word) or lovely spirit
Talking about don’t know what to say, I’m incredibly thankful for your Hearts and way to be. Being honest I’ve learned a lot of things from you too. Thanks for everything, Honey.
Sooo nice written again dear @Honey8 - you are able to paint pictures with your words which are as touching as your drawings, and the methaphors you use are the same cute attitudes that your drawings have, they can come just out of a sweet and lovely heart, and that is you… the owner of a heart of gold, shining bright and wonderful over all and everything- thank you soo much for Olaf and his adventure
Yes! Love what you do and do what you love! Best way of living happy life
Thaaaankkksss! You giys already do that! You are my inspiration dears yes i may not be that famous but I’ll continue as hobbies
True… words are less we need more words! Beautiest= that extreme feeling okay we created a word! Lol kidding 
Oh this was important you know. Thanks i always feared that… but yeah… I’ll write more and become better with every writing
Hehe i am crazy! 
Mee too, a lot for everyone around here. BIG HEARTY THANKS TO ALL!
@theearlywalker my walkerrrr!!! You melted me dear!!! Thanks a lot i am soo happy you liked it! Awiiie you have the best soul dear 
my angels from heavens… all came just to inspire me and help me grow…
I’ve got a new ballad wrote some days ago… i hope you like it 
MAPS
A lost traveller is always ready
To face obstacles and is steady
Emergency kits and additional maps
Good to go and on with caps
They start their journey down the lane
To quench the thrust to travel again
To explore unknown lands of earth
To gain value for their birth
An ecstasy to earn an epiphany
To get the shoes more dirty
To face and rise above barriers
For their soul to be declared as warriors
The travellers usually have got a map
To find their way when they are trapped
They estimate distance and directions to walk
“Getting lost” fear is still there to stalk
They may go in wrong directions
But soon they’ll find that it isn’t the path
There’ll be time when they’ll know
About the path to be chosen at last
They make estimates again
And check the compass and pass the trail
By continuous effort they find their way
“Finally I made it” the quote to say
My dear, this is paralleled with life
We all are on a journey to rise
The travellers proceeding towards our destination
And there is a part called sacrifice
Sacrifice your fear of heights
Sacrifice the demons inside
Or else they’ll eat you up from within
To succeed this is the only price
I promise you’ll get moments to live
The glorious memories to remember
Before you reach your destination
And the death bed processions begin
We don’t have maps like travellers do
We don’t have compass to decide right trails
But we do have your heart that speaks
Louder than these mapping scales
Follow your heart and you are on right path
It’s like a clue or hints it shows
Take care, stay away from what people say
Cause or else you’ll find yourself on the wrong road
Your soul is created in that way
It will speak when the time will arise
The maps are inbuilt in your brain
And shall show up when you are drained
The hardship shall always pay off
You shall always rise
Only if you follow your heart
And pay that correct prize
Child you need to realise
The miracles you can achieve
The power lies within your soul
Will guide you if you hear
Stay strong stay blessed and shine
Leave all your fears behind
Listen to your heart and mind
The actual path of peace and divine
Side note : I’ve recently posted my music on YouTube… just the videos. There is no new tune so you can check them out if you’d like. Thanks. Here’s the link
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