Yes, that’s right, I’ve decided to officially try writing songs now myself. I just started last night, and I’ve already got 2 finished, and I’m sure there will be more in the future as well. So I’ll be sharing my creations with all of you here, and by all means I encourage you to be completely honest about what you think and how you feel about my songs. I hope they help and inspire anyone who may read them.
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You are more than the hate that consumes you
It can’t process your beauty that shines through
It tries to break you everyday
But the pain will fade away
Pain will decieve you and make you feel weak
It will steal your hope and leave you empty inside
But remember that it will never last
If you have love, it will heal you fast
Don’t let your pain ruin your life
It doesn’t define who you are inside
It can never understand who you are
Because it can’t see your loving heart
Let your light shine
Even through the darkest times
And when your love takes over
It will turn the darkness into light
Pain will never hold you back
Cause your love will make it chip and crack
Love is there to catch you if you fall
It will leave you as the one who stands tall
Love will never leave you alone
It will raise you up and give you a home
When you feel like there’s no point in living
Remember that love is always forgiving
Don’t let your pain ruin your life
It doesn’t define who you are inside
It can never understand who you are
Because it can’t see your loving heart
Let your light shine
Even through the darkest times
And when your love takes over
It will turn the darkness into light
Love will pick you up
And wrap you in it’s arms
Love will hold your hand
It will keep you safe from harm
And when your pain fades away
And you are finally free to breathe
Know that love helped you through
And that it’s here to stay
Don’t let your pain ruin your life
It doesn’t define who you are inside
It can never understand who you are
Because it can’t see your loving heart
Let your light shine
Even through the darkest times
And when your love takes over
It will turn the darkness into light
Love is there to catch you if you fall
Love will catch you when you fall
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Love your lines! 
So true!
Thank you! 
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Thank you. This next song though, it has a bit of a different direction, but I think people will be able to relate to it.
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No one ever sees the real me
They don’t know how it feels to bleed this way
My heart and mind are full of pain
And this world never seems to change
I know this darkness all too well
It creates my own personal hell
As my demons just watch and laugh
While I’m burned with fire and reduced to ash
I can’t escape this now
I need to let go of this despair
I just need to know that someone cares
How am I supposed to feel when I’m all alone?
No one there to catch me when I fall
Only my demons to laugh and watch me crawl
All alone in my pain and sorrow
Will I even survive and make it to tomorrow?
And as the pain kills me with every breath
I long so desperately just to find rest
I look everywhere but always come up short
Yet still I try to find something more
But all I feel is hopelessness
Like this pain is never ending
Still I look for help to numb this pain
And never find any, and am left broken again
I need to let go of this despair
I just need to know that someone cares
How am I supposed to feel when I’m all alone?
No one there to catch me when I fall
Only my demons to laugh and watch me crawl
All alone in my pain and sorrow
Will I even survive and make it to tomorrow?
Is it too late for my heart to love?
Or has my pain consumed me too much?
I don’t know if I can break free
From all this darkness inside of me
I need to let go of this despair
I just need to know that someone cares
How am I supposed to feel when I’m all alone?
No one there to catch me when I fall
Only my demons to laugh and watch me crawl
All alone in my pain and sorrow
Will I even survive and make it to tomorrow?
I can’t escape, no I’ll never escape!
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Love this one even more!!
I can so feel the pain! 
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That’s what I was going for. Not only to let it out of me a little bit, but to let others know that they aren’t alone when they feel this way too.
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They were really good I am inperised, looks like we have a new songwriter here.
I think I like the 2nd one better though but the first one is really good too . Keep on writing because you have a real talent
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What a cool surprise! I feel these songs are partially inspired by the verses that you often share with us. Keep it up man! 
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Thank you all, I’m glad you like them so well. 
The first one was actually. I got it all from just one verse alone, be a light unto others that you may shine in darkness.
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@chigokurosaki I really love both lyrics, they are very poetic and heartfelt. I particularly like the desperation of the second song.
I can imagine this as an LP song. Really.
Do the songs have titles?
Thanks for sharing your writing 
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That means a lot, thank you so much
I’m actually unsure on what to name them 
maybe you guys could help?
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For the first one , let your light shine
The 2nd one , I can’t escape this
I am not the best at coming up with titles but those are the ones that come to me
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Yess I guessed it
The first one I would name “Understand Who You Are”. It’s a reversal of the usage in the sentence (“it can never…”) and still carries the main message I think.
The second “Despair”, because that’s the mindset the person seems to be in.
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Like your proposals.
But I’m out of likes.
Again 
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Happy to find this thread 
- will read asap 
nice that you made this decision
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