Broken Shadows(song)

Here is a song that isn’t quite finished yet…the lyrics are by me but the rest is by Mary Courage

What do you think?

Broken Shadows

oh my god… this is so beautiful song :slight_smile: I want to hear it over and over again!

I agree awsome song,great work. [smile][smile][heart]

[quote]Sat, Jan 14, 2012 at 3:42 AM By: LinkinLayra

oh my god… this is so beautiful song :slight_smile: I want to hear it over and over again!
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Thank you both very much!

ur voice is awesome :3 i like never speak :3

[quote=intheend]ur voice is awesome :3 i like never speak :3
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ya Broken Shadows isn’t finished yet! her voice it amazing I think! ya I only wrote the lyrics!

Very nice work!
I’m getting a big Evanescence vibe from this.
Don’t be afraid to work it and rework it over and over and try new things.
You two have a lot of talent here and can make this an amazing song when you’re done.

I’d love to hear a tempo change in the middle, and maybe some longer notes on the singing at the end when the emotion of the words is already hitting us the most.

I really really hope if you guys do another recording that you’ll post it here so we can all listen again!