If it can wait until tomorrow i will take @jabinquaken line
Thanks @acemasters.
I will think on it more. If I get something till tomorrow, Iāll post. If no, I guess, you help us with it.
1st Verse
I feel goose bumps prickling when I smell the air
Wouldnāt want to be anywhere else but here with you
You always tell me that you want me too
Letās fly away and go somewhere
Pre-chrous
You never tell me where Iām going
Never questioning my decisions
But is it alright with you,
continuing this ignorance?
Chorus
What will you decide?
What will you go for?
Continue with the ignorance
Or decide that thereās something more?
2nd Verse
Thereāre things we did together, but now that seemed to have changed
We diverged into two very different paths
They say that it could last forever, but things will never be the same
@gatsie final line of 2nd verse is yours
And I can no longer keep up the charade
You go @theearlywalker
(Please note earlywalker, that your pre-chorus should match the same amount of lines as the last pre-chorus, so about 4 lines)
[quote=āgatsie, post:65, topic:15364, full:trueā]
And I can no longer keep up the charade
So right now itās time to face the truth
even if this means the risk of loosing you -
in my heart you always remain,
wish in real life it could be the same
@the_termin8r (may I ask you to check my grammar?!)
Seems fine. The only error was your spelling of āheartā. Thereās not d.
thank you bro =)
we redo the meet today, ok?!
Iāll see if I can make today, no promises.
yes sureā¦
Iāll try to be there too
@the_termin8r are we keeping the chorus the same or we changing it
@theearlywalker that pre-chorus was awesome well done
Your choice. Iām fine either way.
No
Not my choice
Itās your chorus so ultimently the choice is yours
Just stick with it to keep things consistent then.
Favour then
Put a copy of the song with the 2nd chorus so we can start on final build-up
Chorus
What will you decide?
What will you go for?
Continue with the ignorance
Or decide that thereās something more?
@rickvanmeijel line 1 of final build up if you please
@samuel_the_leader be ready for line 2
I have the third line
@AJ_7 be prepared for the final line
after hiding under your own lie?