There's Something More - The Unity Of Us

If it can wait until tomorrow i will take @jabinquaken line

Thanks @acemasters.

I will think on it more. If I get something till tomorrow, Iā€™ll post. If no, I guess, you help us with it.

Sure thing @jabinquaken :slight_smile:

1st Verse
I feel goose bumps prickling when I smell the air
Wouldnā€™t want to be anywhere else but here with you
You always tell me that you want me too
Letā€™s fly away and go somewhere

Pre-chrous
You never tell me where Iā€™m going
Never questioning my decisions
But is it alright with you,
continuing this ignorance?

Chorus
What will you decide?
What will you go for?
Continue with the ignorance
Or decide that thereā€™s something more?

2nd Verse
Thereā€™re things we did together, but now that seemed to have changed
We diverged into two very different paths
They say that it could last forever, but things will never be the same

@gatsie final line of 2nd verse is yours


And I can no longer keep up the charade


You go @theearlywalker
(Please note earlywalker, that your pre-chorus should match the same amount of lines as the last pre-chorus, so about 4 lines)

[quote=ā€œgatsie, post:65, topic:15364, full:trueā€]


And I can no longer keep up the charade

So right now itā€™s time to face the truth
even if this means the risk of loosing you -
in my heart you always remain,
wish in real life it could be the same

@the_termin8r (may I ask you to check my grammar?!)

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Seems fine. The only error was your spelling of ā€˜heartā€™. Thereā€™s not d.

thank you bro =)

we redo the meet today, ok?!

Iā€™ll see if I can make today, no promises.

yes sureā€¦ :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Iā€™ll try to be there too

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@the_termin8r are we keeping the chorus the same or we changing it

@theearlywalker that pre-chorus was awesome well done :slight_smile:

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Your choice. Iā€™m fine either way.

No
Not my choice

Itā€™s your chorus so ultimently the choice is yours

Just stick with it to keep things consistent then.

Favour then

Put a copy of the song with the 2nd chorus so we can start on final build-up

Chorus
What will you decide?
What will you go for?
Continue with the ignorance
Or decide that thereā€™s something more?

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@rickvanmeijel line 1 of final build up if you please
@samuel_the_leader be ready for line 2
I have the third line
@AJ_7 be prepared for the final line

Donā€™t you think thereā€™s more to life

@samuel_the_leader

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after hiding under your own lie?