The Unity Of Us: Demons in my head

The Barracks
#31

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
no longer hiding in my pain
@GioS
acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8

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#32

Awww @theearlywalker your lines are amazing !

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#33

I’ll post my line later today, sorry for the delay, guys.

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#34

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
no longer hiding in my pain
the darkest days now fall behind
@acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8

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#35

@theearlywalker is the chorus abit long?

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
@Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8

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#36

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Thoughts are haunting
I have no song left to sing
@jabinquaken
Honey8

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#37

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Thoughts are haunting
I have no song left to sing
No voice, no choice and shattered wings
@Honey8

I don’t get it. What is this song about?

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#38

Tbh… neither me… just keep on writing!

I’ll do my lines tonight :slightly_smiling_face:

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#39

I should be about demons in your head right? Perhaps we strayed too far from the original idea lol.

Exactly, just let your thoughts flow and we’ll see whatever we end up with

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#40

Nice song :ok_hand:t4:. I wrote a song few years ago that has the exact same title :joy:

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#41

Sorryyyyyy!!! I JUST FORGOT ABOUT IT!!! :fearful:

(Verse 1)
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

(Verse 2)
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

(Slow Melodic Bridge)
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

(Chorus )
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Thoughts are haunting
I have no song left to sing
No voice, no choice and shattered wings
Just left circling in thoughtless rings

Along with this the song ends! Its a nice one… tho many of us… including me… didn’t knew what we were writing about! :wink:

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#42

If we want to write a cohesive song next time, we shouldn’t just write whatever lines we like, but lines that fit with the previous ones :slight_smile:

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#43

I think its kinda gets lost in the chorus overall its an ok song but not our best by far

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#44

Agree @rickvanmeijel and @acemasters - so I guess it’s nomination time? :grinning:

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#45

I’m up for it, don’t know about the rest of the band?

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#46

Remember you dont have to wait for me to post in the nominations topic you can go ahead just include me in the tag list

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#47

Busy? Do you do a pic as contribution for the vid too @acemasters??

#48

Pic for video? Eh?

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#49

Wait- I link you the thread …

@acemasters

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#50

I’ve got several titles saved up. I gotta get home before I can nominate because I forgot the title I wanted but wrote it down.