Need to start on next weeks lyrics (day 8-14)
They keep getting better and better
This! This one is really good, one of your best yet actually. Keep it up man
This really good so far this year I would say this my favorite one too @rickvanmeijel keep up the good work @acemasters
Day 8: Familiar Stranger
How could you forget me?
When we did so much
Do you recent me?
Now weâre no longer in touch
Whatever happened?
To us, itâs not the end
Donât ever forget me?
Now weâre apart my friend
The story is fimiliar
As friends we grew apart
I hardly ever saw ya
That was just the start
Things changed so quickly
Sometimes I look back
If things happened differently
Where would we be at?
How could you forget me?
When we did so much
Do you recent me?
Now weâre no longer in touch
Whatever happened?
To us, itâs not the end
Donât ever forget me?
Now weâre apart my friend
We went our different ways
The path that we chose
Thereâs nothing we can say
And thatâs the way life goes
You do your own thing, I do mine
We now have a family
I know itâs been awhile, hope you donât mind
I donât want to forget you, donât forget me
How could you forget me?
When we did so much
Do you recent me?
Now weâre no longer in touch
Whatever happened?
To us, itâs not the end
Donât ever forget me?
Now weâre apart my friend
Itâs easy to cast aside
Memories left inside
And leave it all behind
How could you forget me?
When we did so much
Do you recent me?
Now weâre no longer in touch
Whatever happened?
To us, itâs not the end
Donât ever forget me?
Now weâre apart my friend
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Itâs so nice to read your lyrics⌠you can put in words what many people have only in thoughts⌠well done!
Reading this lyric just remind me that we lose in touch with friends that means so much to to us. Very well done .
Day 9: Heartbreak City
I am walking down a lonely road
On my way to heartbreak city
They have a hotel room reserved for me
Because I always end up there
The room is gloomy, kinda sad looking
No light can find its way in
A single bed, laid out for me to sleep
On my own, where my heart bleeeeeeds
I donât know what I am doing wrong
But for some reason I always come back here
I am walking down a lonely road
On my way to heartbreak city
They have a hotel room reserved for me
Because I always end up there
Somewhere along a dark alleyway
The bricks of the hotel all seem cracked
It seems fitting as its just like my heart
No way to fix what is already brooooken
I donât know what I am doing wrong
But for some reason I always come back here
I am walking down a lonely road
On my way to heartbreak city
They have a hotel room reserved for me
Because I always end up there
I hope one day Iâll never come back
I hope that I can stay away
I hope there is a way out of here
I hope, I can only hope
Because I donât know what I am doing wrong
But for some reason I always come back here
I am walking down a lonely road
On my way to heartbreak city
They have a hotel room reserved for me
Because I always end up there
In heartbreak city
In heartbreak city
In heartbreak cityâŚ
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
Reminds me a bit of Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day!
This part specially!
Well done though! I like it
Same! lol
Nice lyric!
Didnât even realize this
Iâm glad it wasnât just me my brain kept going: the only one that I have ever knownnn haha
Great work @acemasters !! Your songs are my day ending dose! I read them before i sleep via emails!
I loved each and every song of it! Youâve taken up a hard challenge but you are going great !
Good luck!
Awesomeâ:muscle:
I like It
Just move it in my mind
Before you read day, I should mention that all the songs, barring 1, including this 1, are all brand new songs, written this year, usually a day early! So far the challenge is easy, but i am sure as i power on it will get harder
Thank you all for taking the time to read my lyrics and for the support
Finally, B.O.T.F Quarter Finals will be put up some point this week!
Day 10: Pulling My Strings
I donât feel safe around you
Making me do things I wouldnât do
Having a tight grip on me
I know that I canât break free
I donât feel like me around you
Or like the things you put me through
Keeping me around with your magic spell
I canât find a way out of this hell
Youâre pushing me to the edge
Pulling me closer to insanity
Youâre pushing me to do all these things
Pulling the strings, pulling my strings
I donât know how to be around you
But always did what you wanted me to
Having a hold on me
Youâll never ever let it be
Youâre pushing me to the edge
Pulling me closer to insanity
Youâre pushing me to do all these things
Pulling the strings, pulling my strings
Am I your puppet?
(Youâre pulling my strings)
Repeat x4
AM I YOUR PUPPET
YOUâRE PULLING MY STRINGS
Repeat x4
Youâre pushing me to the edge
Pulling me closer to insanity
Youâre pushing me to do all these things
Pulling the strings, pulling my strings
The Band
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker
I imagine this would be bada$$ to listen to
Good to here that! Perfect. I am back too from this week
Loved this line!
Itâs a great way to start your song inviting us to a reflection of our past and our future.
Karma?
Self-power, I like that.
Direct questions, very hard to answer themâŚ
I liked this song. I donât know why, but this reminds me to @Honey8âs work in the direct and the positive side, also the way you wrote it reminds me a little to my way of thinking.
And I have to be honest, until now I could read it slowly and part by part. I will be reading the others tomorrow.