Aww thank you guys
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Hi @turners34 I really like this one. I feel it says a lot about hope and never giving up . Keep trying. Something I need to do more and listen. Good job Have a good weekend.
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Thanks @lpfan61 I was here a lot during the holidays when I had more time I work alot 10 -12 hour days But I am making more of an effort on weekends now to catch up and maintain contact.
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@the_termin8r Thanks I am slowly getting thru it I hope you are doing ok . Have a nice weekend
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I’m a bit busy but otherwise doing ok, thanks. 
@turners34 Your so very welcome .
I know I haven’t written a song in a while because I was busy
Broken by despair
Broken by despair
You don’t even care
I am trapped inside my head
Left to lay and rot in my bed
With no where to turn
I am left here to burn
Waiting for the dark skies to go away
But it’s night when it’s supposed to be day
But they last forever
but light is never
I may as well be stripped and restrained
With a bullet to my brain
I am left crying for help
but no one could hear my shouts
Even though I tried
I am left here to die
All that’s left to do is to watch the flame
Because I well never end this pain
My heart just left in the shadow
Unable to see tomorrow
I have lost the fight
so this my last night
The world has left me cold
With everything left untold
My love turns to hate
So this has become my fate
Left broken and alone
With no where to call home
And no where to turn
So I am left here to burn
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I read it as a rap… nicely written!
Anyway if it reflects your thoughts, remember that you’re not left alone…never! 
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This is heavy, but nicely written.
Remember this! I hope you’re doing okay Stephanie
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Well written! And I agree with the above. You are not alone. Whatever it is that you are going through will pass. Things will get better in time
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Nice one my friend!!
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Nights growing longer
Days getting shorter
I can’t wait for this to be over
And when I think things will change
Then I realize its all out of my range
Cause it’s all out of my hands
But I refuse to understand
Night turns to day day turns to night
But I must win this fight
Because its tearing me down
Like a broken sound
This has been going on for over a week
But it’s answers I seek
But months turn to years
And love turns to fear
Cause it’s all out of my hands
But I refuse to understand
Night turns to day day turns to night
But I must win this fight
Because its tearing me down
Like a broken sound
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Cause it’s all out of my hands
But I refuse to understand
Night turns to day day turns to night
But I must win this fight
Because its tearing me down
Like a broken sound
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
Now it’s to put my back on my feet
And bring me back from defeat
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Áwêßómé! As always! 
aww thanks honey
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You lay with your dreams that’s been cursed
And all you hear is broken trust
I have been used for the last time
And you committed your last crime ( angist me)
Now as you ran in fear
I have shed my last tear
I refuse to buy your lies
And I can see right through your disgue
You may have fooled the world
But I am left unsold
You can’t repair the damage that’s been done
You have taken everything from me under the sun
You took everything that mattered
And left me broken and shattered
Now as you ran in fear
I have shed my last tear
I refuse to buy your lies
And I can see right through your disgue
You may have fooled the world
But I am left unsold
I can’t spend another night like this
You taking everything in sight
Now as you ran in fear
I have shed my last tear
I refuse to buy your lies
And I can see right through your disgue
You may have fooled the world
But I am left unsold
Cause you took everything that mattered
Leaving me broken and shattered
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Now this does actually remind me of LP, like a few different verses from songs of theirs mixed together. Lol, maybe you will write a song with Mike one day after all.
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