Once again, you’re welcome! I like the way you handled the second verse and the bridge, good work 
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**Breathless**
This song is really personal to me, at first I wasn’t sure if I was going to share it or not but we all really good friends here so you deserve to hear it
You make feel like a never felt before
There is Something about you I adore
Maybe it’s the way you always look at me
Or the way you make me feel lost at sea
Or how You make me feel confident and safe
And With you my heart starts to race
I know that your not perfect
But I know that you’re worth it
You are one of a kind
And you leave me blind
You make feel like a never felt before
There is Something about you I adore
Maybe it’s the way you always look at me
Or the way you make me feel lost at sea
Or how You make me feel confident and safe
And With you my heart starts to race
Even though we just met
We have chemistry like duet
Every time I see your face
My pain is erased
You make feel like a never felt before
There is Something about you I adore
Maybe it’s the way you always look at me
Or the way you make me feel lost at sea
Or how You make me feel confident and safe
And With you my heart starts to race
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
This all know
Let everything else go
Because
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
You make feel like a never felt before
There is Something about you I adore
Maybe it’s the way you always look at me
Or the way you make me feel lost at sea
Or how You make me feel confident and safe
And With you my heart starts to race
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
I leave you breathless
And You leave me speechless
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that smile is a first after one od your songs. Happy for you! You earned it! 
Another Day Closer
There was a day
When my whole life
Was ripped away
The pain that I felt inside
Many things I have to hide
So far away
So far away come the morning day
It is so easy
To just put on a mask
And it’s so easy
To deny feelings with a whiskey flask
Do you know
Oh do you know
What I endure everyday
Do you know
Oh do you know
I am slipping slowly
Falling every day
Losing myself to a machine
Wrecking me
It’s so Obscene
to a place i exhausted long ago
Find a place in the dark
To see the eternity is pain
When it all fall apart
With agony left until a past
And do you know
Oh do you know
What I endure everyday
Do you know
Oh do you know
I am slipping slowly
Falling every day
It’s so unreal
It’s so unbelievably fucking unreal
The pain and the torture
The scorched earth
Underneath your hate
And you want to know
What it feels like
The day you washed up
Another day colder
Another day closer
Knowing your one day closer
To being dead
And do you know
Oh do you know
What I endure everyday
Do you know
Oh do you know
I am slipping slowly
Falling every day
It’s so unreal
It’s so unbelievably fucking unreal
The pain and the torture
The scorched earth
Underneath your hate
And you want to know
What it feels like
The day you washed up
Another day colder
Another day closer
Knowing your one day closer
To being dead
One day closer
To be being dead
Another day closer
To being dead
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Thank you Steph!
This is dark. Nice to see a new song though 
I know this song is dark @rickvanmeijel because I wrote it when I was in a dark place, but letting my feelings out through music helps me and it has always helped
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It’s been awhile since I have written anything, because I been extremely busy with work and dealing with some personal issues, but now that I have a little more time on my hands I can finally get back until my lyric writing, I currently have a few things in the works
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ONE
Thought that you would be the one
Though that I had really win
But it I was fucking wrong
Because like that you were gone
It’s was fun for a day or two
But that’s before I saw the real you
Your were unkind and cruel
The torture so surreal
I was a pawn in your game
But I won’t fall under your rane
I refuse to be the number two
So I had to leave you
Your going to see how strong I can be
Just want and see
Letting my real colors flow
Letting my spirit grow
Letting my strength show
Letting the negativity go
I am stronger as One
Stronger as one
Years later we might again
Thinking that we be friends
But your lost that chance
When you beat my ass
I have moved to the top
And I ain’t gonna stop
So just walk out that door
Cause I ain’t got time for you no more
I am no longer a piece in your game
Now I am no longer under your rane
I am Now the number one
It’s set over and done.
Your going to see how strong I can be
Just want and see
Letting my real colors flow
Letting my spirit grow
Letting my strength show
Letting the negativity go
I am stronger as One
Stronger as one
You may be a price but I am the queen
And I rule Supreme
You may be a price but I am the queen
And I rule Supreme
You may be a price but I am the queen
And I rule Supreme
am no longer a piece in your game
Now I am no longer under your rane
I am Now the number one
It’s set over and done.
I am stronger by myself
I am stronger
I am stronger as one
I am stronger by myself
I am stronger
I am stronger as one
I am stronger by myself
I am stronger
I am stronger as one
I am Stronger as one
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Wow! Powerful lyrics!! 
Thank you for sharing!
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**Warrior**
Pushed back in the corner
Given that cold shoulder
Even though I am wiser and older
No one hears a word I say
My thoughts just shaved away
And I face this every day
But now I am turning heads
I am finally ahead
Making them listen up
Rising up to the top
No way I can stop
Reaching for the sky
Flying so high
Asking why
I waited so long to true
Waited so long to break though
Now I am on fire
I am going higher
Fueling my desire
Breaking through the barriers
Cause I am a fierce warrior
And I will conquer
now I am turning heads
I am finally ahead
Making them listen up
Rising up to the top
No way I can stop
Reaching for the sky
Flying so high
Asking why
I waited so long to true
Waited so long to break though
No longer will anything be in my way
this fierce warrior is here to stay
No longer will anything be in my way
this fierce warrior is here to stay
No longer will anything be in my way
this fierce warrior is here to stay
No longer will anything be in my way
this fierce warrior is here to stay
Forever
now I am turning heads
I am finally ahead
Making them listen up
Rising up to the top
No way I can stop
Reaching for the sky
Flying so high
Asking why
I waited so long to true
Waited so long to break though
No longer will anything be in my way
this fierce warrior is here to stay
Forever
Forever
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I am working on an new and improved 12 days of Christmas song and I was wondering @acemasters would like to join me on this
Rob and Pat already get a quick preview of it
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Yeah 
That’s fun! And you’re early writer 
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@StephLP18 funny you mention this as I wrote a christmas song a couple years back lol
Sure why not
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This exactly why I thought you would be the perfect partner and your extremely talented
And I have my first draft done
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@StephLP18 awww you are an amazing writer and incredibly kind
Let me see the 1st draft and see what I can add