Gray - The Unity of Us

The Barracks
#21

Hey @yolo5494
Will you be joining in with this writing exercise (joining our lyrical band)

#22

Lets do wraped rainbow :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

#23

okayy why not?

#24

how should i precisely do? @acemasters

#25

@samuel_the_leader good to see you voted

Will you be contributing to this one?!?

#26

Well the winning title will decide whom will do what from the 1st line to build up
Pre-chorus to the actual chorus
Etc etc more will be explained once the winner is choosen which will be soon

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#27

hey Dude, this becomes nicer and nicer in ya thread!!! Love to find your invitation to @yolo5494 -great you join dear. :wink:

@samuel_the_leader we will enjoy you back !!! :grin:

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#28

Gray wins so @rickvanmeijel will you do the honours and break down who is doing what

Please add @yolo5494 to the list
Still not sure if @samuel_the_leader is joining us or not and leave out @lplovebug_Jess for now until she is comfortable to return

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@theearlywalker
@AJ_7
@acemasters (me)
And of course yourself

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#29

Ok, so here’s a random break down:

Verse 1
first 2 lines: @AJ_7
next 2 lines: @acemasters
last 2 lines: myself

Pre-chorus 1
2 lines: @theearlywalker

I will do the first chorus

Verse 2
first 2 lines: @gatsie
next 2 lines: @the_termin8r
last 2 lines: myself

Pre-chorus 2
2 lines: @yolo5494

Alternative chorus
@jabinquaken

Bridge
line 1: myself
line 2: @gatsie
line 3: @the_termin8r
line 4: @jabinquaken
line 5: @acemasters
line 6: @theearlywalker
line 7: @yolo5494
line 8: @AJ_7

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#30

We have our order

Please remember to include the previous lines for the next person and tag the next person

@AJ_7 you are up first with your two lines

#31

@rickvanmeijel @acemasters thanks for adding me in the song

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#32

My life is gray
I’m waiting for the end of the day
@acemasters

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#33

My life is gray
I’m waiting for the end of the day
For something to come and wash away
All the emptiness that I hold inside

@rickvanmeijel

(Kinda linking 3 lines together and if you can link your lines to my 2nd line it might flow, more then happy to change it if you are not completely happy)

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#34

it’s @theearlywalker 's turn to write the pre-chorus

#35

No @rickvanmeijel
You said @AJ_7 2 lines (done)
Me 2 lines (done)
You 2 lines (not done)
Then @theearlywalker pre-chorus

You need to add your two lines to AJ and mine

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#36

After reading the lines i dont think it will too hip hoppy

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#37

you’re right :smiley:

My life is gray
I’m waiting for the end of the day
For something to come and wash away
All the emptiness that I hold inside
Everyone’s so distant and no one seems to care
Looking at their screens, going nowhere

@theearlywalker

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#38

Maybe if you’d consider a Missy Elliot kind of vibe to it, it could be hip hoppy :stuck_out_tongue:

#39

It is this nowhere where you find me
and in this nowhere you learn to see…become aware

back to you @rickvanmeijel

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#40

My life is gray
I’m waiting for the end of the day
For something to come and wash away
All the emptiness that I hold inside
Everyone’s so distant and no one seems to care
Looking at their screens, going nowhere

It is this nowhere where you find me
and in this nowhere you learn to see…become aware

Tell me what to do now, it’s all so gray
Positive feelings, I can’t make them stay
I’m constantly in someone else’s way
Nothing’s left for me, I need to get away

@gatsie

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