I am looking forward for the guitar 
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It’s really good!!
That’s a reference to Numb, right? Found the hidden message
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Exactly! I based in that line to write this one.
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I didn’t realize that you edited your post. The message isn’t that, but good try.
I did something like that with the song I’m writting, but not with Numb, I really want to share it with everyone, but it’s not finished yet, there’s a verse that I can’t get right, it just feels forced.
It’s not? 
I’m just disappointed in myself now
As a writer I am so perfectionist that if I hide something I hide so well as I can. So don’t feel disappointed with yourself, it is not easy message what I put there, even if my brother didn’t find it completely.
Edit: post your song. Here are some songwriters and they can help you. I’m not exactly a songwriter but I can help you too.
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Haha, ok, I’ll keep trying.
I am like that too, and the song is about Chester, so I want it to be the best I can do
Edit: Spoiler alert, I wasn’t supposed to tell you that, I wanted to see if you found out while reading it 
Do it, and take your time.
I’d like to see it what you have until now.
The verse that’s in red is the one that doesn’t really fit, and the one next to it is another possibility, but the 3rd and 4th lines still feel forced. I talked about it with a friend of mine and he agrees, but doesn’t have any ideas to help me out with it
Alright. Let me think for a moment.
Just for curiosity, what kind of emotions do you want to transmit? I work more with emotional things and the structure of the song is in second place.
When I started writing it the idea was to talk not only about how I feel, but also trying to put myself in the place of other fans and people who loved and cared about Chester.
What I want to express is that even though he is not here physically, he lives inside of us, I think that’s what I have already written, how much he helped lots of people go through different situations. Basically how important he was and how much he will be missed
Keep talking via email or Facebook ok? My email is: tellezvictormanuel@outlook.com and in FB I appear as: Vito Tellez. I have some ideas.
Is your profile pic the LP logo?
For a moment there I thought you were an FBI operative. 
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Yes, it is.
Jajaja who knows, maybe I’m in one jajaja just kidding.
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Hahaha
I just talked to you.
Btw, thank you sooo much for helping me out!
Alright. Let me check out.
Even I read it as FBI !!
Lol… 
Crustacean
Touched by the air and the waves
Feeling shy and afraid of myself
A thousand monsters desire my body
I walk nowhere yelling from the inside
Am I a crustacean?
The current is the only thing
That keeps me alive
If I follow its orders.
It’s like a barrier, my wall
But it’s the only way to survive.
I feel like a crustacean
Waiting for its destiny
But I’m tired of be what they want (to)
I want to be more like a tiger
I belong out there
I need to leave the beach
And find the sky
In my mental path.
As crustacean
I feel like one.
Here is the last version, and maybe the official one.
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