Ace Masters Unfinished Works

The Barracks
#201

Help… stuck on this song
It’s called
When Did Kids Get This Way

Kids today don’t understand
All they do now days is demand
“We want, we want, we want, we want”
Screaming they want dessert in the middle of the resturant
After being told they can only get it if they finish all their food
And they start to answer back, when did kids start becoming so rude

Im stuck… lol

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#202

takes me back down memory lane
oh if i did that-imagine the pain!
a subtle pinch under the table, ah damn
oof a licking getting home-bam!
always thought i had it wrong
but seeing now thats all long gone
i wonder if they had it right
good intentions under every fight

kids today dont understand
they dont know what its like to run free on land
“new game, new game, new game”
screaming theyre done with the last one now its lame
etc etc etc

idk :sweat_smile:
maybe gives you some idea :grimacing:

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#203

I like the direction of the chorus but the 2nd part of the verse dont think fits but yeah throw ideas at me

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#204

hehe yeah ummm…

blame a certain thing for their behavior in the previous part? :thinking:
like blame the parenting in the first
then the second would be societys path?

#205

Nah…this is more a them behaving in a certain manner and how the f it got to that

The 2nd part i was thinking of incorpperating how i would never dare talk to my parents in that manner

#206

ahhhh ok
what about building up to it?
like i shoulda known with that constantly crying baby
then damn it started in the terrible twos
sippin a bit of my booze lol jk
but then school troubles
and so forth :confused:

i dont know a lick of songwritin gproperly lol but what if thaqt first part should be a second part? like…make it the second verse, not the chorus? idk if i said that right lol

#207

Maybe you could add a verse that talks about your ideal image of how you’d like to see kids.

#208

I can’t help you with the song, but I can give you an answer to your question. Bad parenting, simple as. The song should be called Parental Collapse. :joy:

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#209

Once my son was nagging, bagging and pestering me for something.
I got really pissed of: “Stop this!! Tell me! When ever, in your whole live, you’ve gotten something from me by annoying me that much?”
He shut up, looked at me with huge eyes and said:
“Oh! I totally forgot. You aren’t Dad.”
:laughing:

All this loudly pleading kids do not bother me, I take pity on them.
To get everything you want by nagging didn’t make happy kids.

Sorry @acemasters , probably not helpful. But I can’t rhyme, just write things down who want to get out.
And I wasn’t even tagged. :woman_facepalming:
:rooster::crazy_face:

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#210

Oh Ace- @acemasters my gates are open wide, here comes the floods :joy::joy::

Talking to adults like: hey dude I’m a man,I know how to get my will - legally or ripping it off - don’t matter to me I just feel like god

Respect they don’t even know how to spell - but telling you you’re wrong with everything man that’s hell - and that’s the next generation that’s growing up now- supposed to be our leaders in a future unknown

BUT

Sucking on duties- no matter what- ask them for something you sure get it NOT - if you try to explain them how life works, they laugh at you steady or even worse- tell you you don’t know about nothing- especially not about their world - feeling so special, without any reason for- just being rude-

When do they became this awful bunch of nothing…

( to be correct: there are wonderful and great kids outhere too- god bless :heart:

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#211

I was meant to be sorry, but i’m far from it
I wasn’t the one that was never honest
Somehow till now, managed to twist it around
But i’ve wised up, you can no longer keep me down
I’m finally standing up to the shit that you have breathed
Everytime you made me wrong, made me believe
The time has come, for you to finally face the truth
That i’ve had enough and i’m finally done with you
Done With You - Ace Masters

Another unfinished song…

Might pick this one up though
I like the flow

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#212

No progress in the other? :sweat_smile: I was left with curiosity :joy:

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#213

did you end the song? or i should try here a bit. :smile: it’s been 17 days i was lost sorry i didn’t reply

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#214

My writing has slowed down alot since my move

Im finding less time to write so its just taking me alot longer to complete songs atm

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#215

Take your time Ace, Sometimes it’s just like this- stay strong :muscle:t2:

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#216

Here we go, some freestyle lyrics for you lot

Who is still struggling with the thoughts of yesterday
Is the pain to great that it won’t go away
It’s dragging you down, you don’t know what to do
Gripping tightly, it won’t let go of you
You can’t come to terms of anything
To the point you don’t know what tomorrow will bring…

Thats all i have, kinda went blank after that haha

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#217

:partying_face: a cure for the itch of wanting to hear something new from you still! Haha and fitting lyrics =]

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#218

I agree, this can be a solid base for a song. Let’s continue this session @acemasters :slightly_smiling_face:

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#219

New love song in the pipeline

Here is a preview

Everyday is like a dream waking up next to you
Because I can’t believe how lucky I am
The feeling of love swelling in my heart
Making it beat faster and faster

This is what you do and it feels good
Feeling wanted, loved and understood
Picking me up when I feel down
Being my strength so I don’t fall to the ground

I love you so much words can’t explain
I try to show each and everyday
Sometimes it doesn’t always come across that way
But know that it’s true when I say
I love you

The Band

@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@NickGr
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker

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#220

Feeling so happy that you’re in a mood to write such a nice lovesong :heart: Enjoy this flow Ace, after the rough days you deserve exactly this :blush::tada::+1:t2:

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